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What would you like to see?

Jestah the Demon Queen
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Hearthook the Sexy Queen ~ <3
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MY EYES!! THE BLEACH WON'T WORK!!
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Is it wrong if I found both of you equally as attractive :3
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CHEESE AND MACARONI!!
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Reply #350 on: December 31, 2010, 06:03:46 AM
Oh hey what do you know. All my choices are majority!


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Reply #351 on: January 08, 2011, 06:27:49 AM
*Pant pant pant* I work too hard with these guys.

[spoiler=The first Wave of Bizarre]
Wanna talk a bit about the designs...but not now, I must go rest my tired hands.

PS: Full Image[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Winners of the Fate of Designs, Round 1, Mini Contest]

:WARNING!!: Brace yourself for giant wall of text. :WARNING!!:

Excuse the bad title, I'm very tired, I've worked on this guys for quiet some time (mostly on the color scheme) and made this painstaking illustrations of the characters in 2 days (and they look a lot better in person. Feck you crappy scanner and my temporal limitations with MS Paint editing)

Anyhoo, here is the first of the three gropus of the finalized designs for the Bizarre Brawlers characters. All based upon the winning entries for each character (Urey Sorrow = B, Lily Jeil = C, Ktori Pong = C, Rotu Lightning = A & C [link])

Now to congratulate the winners whose suggestions were used for the final designs and how they effected the character (design wise)

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In Urey's category, there were quiet a few suggestions used in this one, some altered the character a lot, some not as altering, and a few seemed to be pretty much the same suggestion of other contestants.

Best thing to do in this situation is pick the one who effected the design the most. Probelm is that there were a few that suggested the same things I used in the final design, and I really don't wanna let this people feel a bit cheated.

So I decided to choose the contestants gave the biggest impact for the design. And said contestants are:

*ShadeDarkness*
Shade suggested two things; to give B, A's hair (which I didn't use) and for the character to use A's daggers. At first I wasn't planning to use daggers, rather two customized rapiers that looked like large pins.
It wasn't until later that I remembered that Urey's special ability consisted of him stabbing certain points on/in his body. Trying to puncture oneself in the heat of battle with a long weapon like a rapier would not only look awkward, but you'd loose precious time in a fight trying to turn the weapon towards yourself.
So I changed the weapons to small daggers, but kept the pin look.

*Sniper X*
Sniper suggested a lot of things, I won't write them all down cause I still have a lot to write down after this. The suggestions that impacted the design the most would be to make him look more like a ragdoll (I read that as "give him more stitches), mix B and C's jackets (And I made a few minr alterations as well) and last but not least to make his weapons thinner and sharper (aka. make them look more like pins).

I couldn't make the too thin though because he needs a sturdy weapon for blocking attacks. Though I did make the tip sharper then it's predescesors.

She also suggested to use stitches on his eyes, feeling like that that would kinda make him look less like a protagonist I insted put a button on the "smiley" on his sweater. Also changed the belts on his boots to large X shapped stitches.


*Lostboy92, Borockman, Cobalt, Sniper X*
Why so many contestants for one suggestion? Because they all relate to the same thing...Urey's hair. They all said to use C's hair style. And you know what!?...I love you them all for thinking the same thing.

To be honest, I was going to use C's hair for the final design, regardless of suggestions or vote. Why you ask? Well, A's hair was just the generic emo haircut, which would kinda feel odd on a character who'se based on a voodoo doll, and B...I just hated B's hair with a passion. I regret making such horrible hair.

Though to be honest i'm not sure if I should reward the guys suggesting something that I was planning to do anyway...eh, I'll let it slide this time. Though no breaks for the next 2 rounds!

And with that said, I might as well reward
*Cachete, VGConcador*
Who suggested to use C's using the sweater and the button belt, respectively, for the final design. Again, was planning to do so anyway, but if I'm rewarding the one's who suggested the hair thing, it would just be fair to let them be rewarded fo their suggestions too.
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In Lily's category, the winners is:

*VGConcador*
For suggesting to give Lily blueskin to show that she was a water based demon, and so I can still keep the red, yellow-ish and black clothing. (Of course I had to make the dress looks a bit more aquatic as well, so it would be obvious she was a water based fighter).

Sniper X also suggested to make Lily's clothes purple [red(demon) + blue (water) = purple) I tried it, though it dind't really click with me. I did ended up using it for her pants though. (mostly due to a new color limit rule I gave myself)
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Ktori Pong also has two winners.

*VGConcador*
Who suggested using B's paddle top insignia (which is badass, though I had to make the thing black so the design could work with the limitations I gave myself).

And *Cobalt*
Who suggested to make Ktori wear paddles on his arms as armlets. Now i did try that before with one of his previous designs...though I made the mistake of using an actual paddle and it didn't work for me. So I tried making the paddle into a wierd armlet...and I really liked it.

Aside from that, Ktori didn't really get that much of a facelift compared to the others.

I would also like to give an honorable mention to Borockman, who's comment about Ktori C's colorscheme being a perfect representation for ping-pong made me decide to stick with, and stay true to the concept of the design .
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As for Rotu's category...considering that most of of the suggestions were give C's X item to A and vice versa, and the fact that both of those entries won the votes, I believe that makes the suggestions null and void.

Not only that but most, if not all of the design choices for Rotu were made by me.

...I should give at least one person the reward for this category. And considering that Cobalt, who suggested to use B's scarf (and I did...color wise), has already gotten a prize, And Sniper X, who suggested to make the scarf look a bit more mechanical also won the last few entries, the winner for Rotu design suggestion is:

*Yarrot*
Because the other ones are pretty much the same contestents that already won.
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So to recap, the winners for the FoD round 1 contest are; ShadeDarkness, Sniper X, Lostboy92, Borockman, Cobalt, Chacete, VGConcador and Yarrot. 8 out of 19, a bit too generous on my part methinks.

The winners shall be credited in the Bizarre Brawlers Project, and have the choice to have a character of their creation appear in said project.

I hope you have all enjoyed this process of character creation and hope to see more of you in the other 2 rounds. Those who have won may continue to cast their vote on their favorite designs but they cannot give enter the mini-contest to win again. (Cause that would be greedy).

Thank You all, till next time.[/spoiler]

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Reply #352 on: January 08, 2011, 07:55:31 AM
The final design look awesome


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Reply #353 on: January 08, 2011, 08:12:08 AM
I agree, very brilliant final designs.


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Reply #354 on: January 08, 2011, 08:45:51 AM
One word:
Perfect!!!



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Reply #355 on: January 08, 2011, 08:51:50 AM
Urge to fanarting rising....

and now it's fulfilled.


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Reply #356 on: January 15, 2011, 06:22:14 PM
Just a reminder, to those who won the first Round of the mini contest (aka. Borockman, Sniper X, Cobalt) please contact me through the forums PM system so we can start making them characters.

Of course if you do not wish a character of your own creation (weather it be pre-existing or made ofr this particular project). Only rule I have is that said character not be based on an existing series (aka. such as fan characters based on videogames, books, tv shows etc.).

If any of you do not wish to have a character of your own devising appear in the project, please be sure to inform me before the project has begun.



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Reply #357 on: January 15, 2011, 09:04:50 PM
I don't have any original characters (not just yet).



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Reply #358 on: January 15, 2011, 09:28:28 PM
So, the rest of us aren't allowed to give you character ideas...me sad


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Reply #359 on: January 15, 2011, 10:30:07 PM
PM sent.


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Reply #360 on: January 15, 2011, 11:09:39 PM
I don't have any original characters (not just yet).
That's okay, there's no hurry. Considering that I have yet to upload the second round of the designs, and adterwards people have 15 days to input their votes for the most appealing designs and their suggestions, then there's the time that takes to make the final alterations to the designs and after that is the short break, followed the upload of the next and final round.

And the process repeats itself from there.

So there's plenty of time to come up with a character by then.
Though if you want, here are four words that might help inspire you to make the character: wierd, fun and action-y
So, the rest of us aren't allowed to give you character ideas...me sad
You can, if you give suggestions and I use them...which if I remember correctly you didn't even vote for any of the first batch of designs. 8D.

EDIT: Forgot to add something. For those who are making their characters, you have two choices of the character type. You can either make him/her/it a competitor in the Wishing Star Tournament, or have him/her/it be a spectator.

If the character is going to compete, please tell me their combat styles and their special abilities (if they have special abilities, they could just be normal fighters)

If the charactor is a spectator, please post which of the eight protagonists the character favors (it could be more than 1 or none of them at all) and what said character likes to do while watching the fight. (aka. the character could be drinking beer, listening to music, cheering their lungs out, etc. while they watch the competitors beat themselves up).

Of course, which ever path you choose, you would still need to tell me a summarized description of the characters personality. That way I can capture the character better when they make an appearance.

Hope this helps you guys a bit.



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Reply #361 on: January 15, 2011, 11:24:13 PM
But I always support you D:


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Reply #362 on: January 16, 2011, 12:05:03 AM
I know, I'm just trying to make the mini contest fair for everyone that is participating. (Which was wierd not seeing you participate in the first round).

We still have two more rounds left, and I'm sure you have some good design choices for the upcomming characters wich might give you a better chance of being a winner of the mini-contest and having a character of yours appear in the project. 



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Reply #363 on: January 16, 2011, 01:36:02 PM
Though if you want, here are four words that might help inspire you to make the character: wierd, fun and action-y
Where's the fourth word?



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Reply #364 on: January 16, 2011, 03:33:33 PM



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Reply #365 on: January 16, 2011, 05:33:11 PM
lol



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Reply #366 on: January 19, 2011, 04:34:45 AM
[spoiler=Fate of Designs, Round 2]
Second Round of the characters not a lot of people know about because I have yet to start the project yet. Though that might have been a good idea, considering that the first batch of characters came out so well, thanks to the help of you guys and gals out there.

Just like before, I'm going to show you folks four different characters with three different designs (more-or-less). You must choose the design that mostly appeals to you/grabs your attention more. From left to right, the characters designs are assigned by letters [A, B and C]

The first [A] in the rows features the characters' the original designs (more or less), second being the designs that where going to be final designs, and the third [C] are the more recent designs I've made.

Now here's the twist, some of you may like design C, but you think that A's shoes/gloves/hair/etc. migt look good on the design. But you also think the color scheme B would be the best choice.

Instead of being limited to only the three choices, those who wish to participate or just contribute to the project may post some original suggestions for things that might make the designs a bit more appealing.

Example: "I don't like the hairstyle for Rotu, maybe if you made his hair a bit curvy it would make the character a bit more attractive."

or

"If Urey is supposed to be a voodoo man, he should have a button covering one of his eyes."
Something like that basically.

Suggestions like these will probably help in making all new and maybe better design then the three shown here. After the "votes" (read posts), I shall make one final alteration to the most popular design and said design shall be used for the project I have in mind.

Now then here's a special treat, those who made the suggestions that were used in the final design will not only be credited in the project, but also have the pleasure of having a character created by them appear in this project [said character will obviously not effect the overall story of this project], that is of course if said person wishes to have a character of their own imagining appear in the project.

The character in question can be either a competitor in the tournament in which the story of this fighters take place

or

The character can be a mere spectator for the matches.

Voting/Posting starts today on Jan, 18 2011 and ends on the Feb 4 2010, 12:00 A.M.

Here is a short summary of the characters so that might help you make a choice. From top to bottom:

Marston "Bartin" Samson

A fisherman from the small town of Missleberry. His a jolly man, though at times he can be a bit dense. Bartin, as most people call him, recieved a special gift when he caught a magical fish, he now posseses the power to transform and extend his arms into various fishing tools.

Bartin is competing in the Wishing Star Tournament in the name of his grandfather, The Swordfish Knight, who could not make it to this supposedly secret tournament due to an illness.

Tula (and her living abdomen, Larry)

Tula was once an ordinary spider who was the pet of an old and well known puppeteer. The small spider wished to have hand to play and perform along with her master. Thanks to some genetic splicing from extrateriestrials, Tula was shaped into a spider with hands. Since her master passed away of old age before this transformation, she decided to carry on his legacy for the remainder of her days.

Unfortunately for a certain Larry Geropetti, the transformation had he not unwillingly gave his human body for alien science. Now he is cursed to spend his days as a sort of parasite acting as the spiders abdomen.

Hearing rumors of the tournament where the prize is a wish for the champion, Larry convinced tula to compete, so he can get his own body back, and let her keep her beloved, puppet moving hands.

Jubelle

Julia was once a proud and respected drag queen in the city of Las Sinphony. Julia met her (read his) untimely demise and now inhabits a cursed cat costume. The drag queen's spirit itself cannot move the body itself, but thanks to a unnatural strong and fierce child that stumbled upon her, the two have become one being known as Jubelle, the beautiful killer.

Not much is known about the past of these two, but they are known to be vicious, uncaring, and quite egotistical. Jubelle reasons for entering the tournament is...an limitless supply of food.

It isn't easy keeping a young, growing embodiment of death fed with no salary and an appearance that scares most people away.

Gabriella Sephyr

A priestess in the old city of Eden, she lives in an orphanage taking care of the abandonned and/or lost children. But she was also given another purpose by her guardian angel, purify the world by smiting the wicked.

Gabriella can be a bit naive, but she's a good lass at heart. She follows her guardians orders in hope that the children she cares for and the rest of the future generations live in a peaceful world without having to experience the things she had seen in her youth.

Learning of the Wishing Star Tournament, Gabriella competes to make sure no one with wicked intentions gets their wish granted.

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Reply #367 on: January 20, 2011, 07:50:53 AM
So can we the previous winner give any input at all? just sayin'.



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Reply #368 on: January 20, 2011, 09:34:13 AM
[spoiler=Fate of Designs, Round 2]
Second Round of the characters not a lot of people know about because I have yet to start the project yet. Though that might have been a good idea, considering that the first batch of characters came out so well, thanks to the help of you guys and gals out there.

Just like before, I'm going to show you folks four different characters with three different designs (more-or-less). You must choose the design that mostly appeals to you/grabs your attention more. From left to right, the characters designs are assigned by letters [A, B and C]

The first [A] in the rows features the characters' the original designs (more or less), second being the designs that where going to be final designs, and the third [C] are the more recent designs I've made.

Now here's the twist, some of you may like design C, but you think that A's shoes/gloves/hair/etc. migt look good on the design. But you also think the color scheme B would be the best choice.

Instead of being limited to only the three choices, those who wish to participate or just contribute to the project may post some original suggestions for things that might make the designs a bit more appealing.

Example: "I don't like the hairstyle for Rotu, maybe if you made his hair a bit curvy it would make the character a bit more attractive."

or

"If Urey is supposed to be a voodoo man, he should have a button covering one of his eyes."
Something like that basically.

Suggestions like these will probably help in making all new and maybe better design then the three shown here. After the "votes" (read posts), I shall make one final alteration to the most popular design and said design shall be used for the project I have in mind.

Now then here's a special treat, those who made the suggestions that were used in the final design will not only be credited in the project, but also have the pleasure of having a character created by them appear in this project [said character will obviously not effect the overall story of this project], that is of course if said person wishes to have a character of their own imagining appear in the project.

The character in question can be either a competitor in the tournament in which the story of this fighters take place

or

The character can be a mere spectator for the matches.

Voting/Posting starts today on Jan, 18 2011 and ends on the Feb 4 2010, 12:00 A.M.

Here is a short summary of the characters so that might help you make a choice. From top to bottom:

Marston "Bartin" Samson

A fisherman from the small town of Missleberry. His a jolly man, though at times he can be a bit dense. Bartin, as most people call him, recieved a special gift when he caught a magical fish, he now posseses the power to transform and extend his arms into various fishing tools.

Bartin is competing in the Wishing Star Tournament in the name of his grandfather, The Swordfish Knight, who could not make it to this supposedly secret tournament due to an illness.

Tula (and her living abdomen, Larry)

Tula was once an ordinary spider who was the pet of an old and well known puppeteer. The small spider wished to have hand to play and perform along with her master. Thanks to some genetic splicing from extrateriestrials, Tula was shaped into a spider with hands. Since her master passed away of old age before this transformation, she decided to carry on his legacy for the remainder of her days.

Unfortunately for a certain Larry Geropetti, the transformation had he not unwillingly gave his human body for alien science. Now he is cursed to spend his days as a sort of parasite acting as the spiders abdomen.

Hearing rumors of the tournament where the prize is a wish for the champion, Larry convinced tula to compete, so he can get his own body back, and let her keep her beloved, puppet moving hands.

Jubelle

Julia was once a proud and respected drag queen in the city of Las Sinphony. Julia met her (read his) untimely demise and now inhabits a cursed cat costume. The drag queen's spirit itself cannot move the body itself, but thanks to a unnatural strong and fierce child that stumbled upon her, the two have become one being known as Jubelle, the beautiful killer.

Not much is known about the past of these two, but they are known to be vicious, uncaring, and quite egotistical. Jubelle reasons for entering the tournament is...an limitless supply of food.

It isn't easy keeping a young, growing embodiment of death fed with no salary and an appearance that scares most people away.

Gabriella Sephyr

A priestess in the old city of Eden, she lives in an orphanage taking care of the abandonned and/or lost children. But she was also given another purpose by her guardian angel, purify the world by smiting the wicked.

Gabriella can be a bit naive, but she's a good lass at heart. She follows her guardians orders in hope that the children she cares for and the rest of the future generations live in a peaceful world without having to experience the things she had seen in her youth.

Learning of the Wishing Star Tournament, Gabriella competes to make sure no one with wicked intentions gets their wish granted.

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My suggestions:
1.Bartin - I say Use second design but give him the boots, shirt and gloves of design 3)the shirt has a black hook on it 8D ). Also give him the bait from Design 2 aswell, and maybe  some fish baits on his belt? Maybe you could add some more details to his vest like some buckles and such, to make it seem more like a safe vest.
2.Tula - Her 2nd design but use Larry´s 3rd design. ALso I think stripped socks would look good on her.
3. Jebelle- another double team? 2nd design looks best IMO. Maybe you should give her the nose From design 1. Maybe adding some earrings?
4.Sephyr - 3rd design and give her the scarf from design 2. You can maybe add some more details to the bottom half of her dress?


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Reply #369 on: January 20, 2011, 10:03:27 PM
So can we the previous winner give any input at all? just sayin'.

I'm pretty sure I said the previous winners can vote on what design they find the most appealing, though the suggestion of what would make it a better design is invalid.



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Reply #370 on: January 21, 2011, 06:44:01 AM
Oh, ok I'll do it anyway. Just not now.


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Reply #371 on: January 21, 2011, 08:17:05 AM
Hmm, this batch is a bit harder to vote on... *thinks hard*


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Reply #372 on: January 23, 2011, 12:33:54 AM
Okay now... this is much harder than the previous one.

Bartin

- color scheme I'd use C, but I'd use A skin color.
- hat C
- eyes hmm maybe B, nose is C.

Tula&Larry

- B for overall design and color scheme but use C design (not color) for Larry.
- I like A eyes surprisingly though the forehead eyes should follow B position.
- I'd use C white stocking
- Most definitely use B torso.

Jebelle

- I say A all the way.

Sephyr

- C design all the way.
- though I'd like to see her with ponytail.
- also agree with Blackhook regarding bottom half, maybe add the same yellow insignia on the skirt.


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Reply #373 on: January 23, 2011, 11:30:10 PM
I said votes only...but considering the circumstances, I think I'll let it slide...maybe even twist up that winners rule a bit.
Okay, how about the winners can make suggestions for the final alteration of their favorite design, but are only limited to picking from the three choices shown in the entry.

Are the designs really that hard to choose from?

On a side note:
I made a typo on two characters names. Tulai was changed Tela, I used her original name in the contest because I was half asleep and both names are pretty damn similar. Same story for Jebelle, except he/she is Jubelle (based on his/her first name SnuggJu and the Second name, BellezJu?)



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Reply #374 on: January 24, 2011, 06:53:13 AM
Oops, I think I misunderstood between vote and input, my bad.

and it's quite hard for me at least.


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