Akira's color-full arts

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Gaia

Both spriters and artist's term for Constructive Critisism. basically.
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Quote from: Setsuna F. Seiei on October 10, 2009, 02:34:30 AM
So its about ass now huh? EVEN THE ASS HAS 'EXCEEDED'!

Quote from: Gaia on May 07, 2010, 12:30:32 AM
One mention of LEGENDS and everyone goes batshit.  :\

Yep, every time when someone mentions that game people get energized for an apparent reason whatsoever. It's like this everywhere else, trust me.

It got really messy to find my sprite and comic topic, so it's in my sig.

CephiYumi

Quote from: Gaia on September 19, 2009, 10:53:29 PM
C+C

not really sure what the + is for o.o
but great games and great drawing ^^  :cookie:

borockman

Quote from: Akira on September 19, 2009, 10:59:01 PM
I only draw on paper, and I've never said that I was perfect in the drawing.
draw on paper, means, a double-edged work.

Oh, this is the painful truth. I just know too well. (especially me the pen guy)

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Quickman

I was told by artist Mike Hawthorne that the most unhelpful kind of comments you can get are the ones where everyone says everything is perfect.  Artists need critiques.  It is the only way they can improve.

That said, the colouring and linework are nice as usual.  However, Jill's right (her right, your left) hand seems a bit off.  What will help is to either use your own hand to reference from or have someone model for you.  Hands are very tricky to draw.  The background is pretty, though.

Dr. Wily II

Still, that looks really good. :3

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Akira

Quote from: Quickman on September 20, 2009, 06:40:31 AM
I was told by artist Mike Hawthorne that the most unhelpful kind of comments you can get are the ones where everyone says everything is perfect.  Artists need critiques.  It is the only way they can improve.

That said, the colouring and linework are nice as usual.  However, Jill's right (her right, your left) hand seems a bit off.  What will help is to either use your own hand to reference from or have someone model for you.  Hands are very tricky to draw.  The background is pretty, though.

Thankies Quickie, I know ^^,your criticism is different from the criticisms of Gaia,and I appreciate that too.


Gaia

Quote from: Akira on September 20, 2009, 08:31:37 PM
Thankies Quickie, I know ^^,your criticism is different from the criticisms of Gaia

Safe to say that I'm not much of an artist, but more of a spriter (growing into a pixel artist slowly if I can break some habits), yeh. I apologize for the crit I gave you then. Also, do you have an anatomy chart on you? that'd be nice. ^^
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Quote from: Setsuna F. Seiei on October 10, 2009, 02:34:30 AM
So its about ass now huh? EVEN THE ASS HAS 'EXCEEDED'!

Quote from: Gaia on May 07, 2010, 12:30:32 AM
One mention of LEGENDS and everyone goes batshit.  :\

Yep, every time when someone mentions that game people get energized for an apparent reason whatsoever. It's like this everywhere else, trust me.

It got really messy to find my sprite and comic topic, so it's in my sig.

Cpie

Quote from: Akira on September 20, 2009, 08:31:37 PM
Thankies Quickie, I know ^^,your criticism is different from the criticisms of Gaia,and I appreciate that too.



Pfft I can't see how Gaia's criticism was harsh haha He basically said the same think as Quickie.

Quote from: Quickman on September 20, 2009, 06:40:31 AM
I was told by artist Mike Hawthorne that the most unhelpful kind of comments you can get are the ones where everyone says everything is perfect.  Artists need critiques.  It is the only way they can improve.

Thank GOD someone understands!

VixyNyan

Quickie was more friendly with her criticism, noting things about the drawing and the coloring. And of course we artists need critique. We don't like criticism that is put out in a rude or weird attitude way. Besides, the legs are fine, specially because Pulsie does bend his leg like that. Jill's hand might not have the right length on the fingers and they seem a bit separate from each other. It's kinda tough to fix these changes on paper, specially when using darker ink colors, because it won't be easy erasing those tiny slip-ups, remember. Akira doesn't have the digital tools to fix these small things. I respect him for doing his best on the drawing and blending a lot of colors in, giving a bright and colorful result. ^^
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Alice in Entropy

I like it, personally. =3 Though I do like colourful art, so I may be a wee bit biased.

I can't really offer C+C myself, since my style is vastly different and probably full of what people would call "little mistakes". I admire people who draw in their own way, especially if they can draw without the help of this new-fangled technomological jibber-jabberings.

Gaia

Quote from: Nick Z. Rythm on September 20, 2009, 10:49:13 PM
I can't really offer C+C myself, since my style is vastly different and probably full of what people would call "little mistakes".

*whew* At least someone understands my problems (other than I can't reach the dern scanner because it's occupied most of the time). It's also how you handle the C+C, as some people don't take it rather well, so it could be one of the reasons why Akira thought mine was a little more harsh than Quick's.

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Quote from: Setsuna F. Seiei on October 10, 2009, 02:34:30 AM
So its about ass now huh? EVEN THE ASS HAS 'EXCEEDED'!

Quote from: Gaia on May 07, 2010, 12:30:32 AM
One mention of LEGENDS and everyone goes batshit.  :\

Yep, every time when someone mentions that game people get energized for an apparent reason whatsoever. It's like this everywhere else, trust me.

It got really messy to find my sprite and comic topic, so it's in my sig.

Akira


Cpie

 Those tree leaves are amazing! XD

Well done!

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CephiYumi

the leaves are very good, and such pretty flower pattern ^o^  :cookie:

Blackhook

I thought for a second that the whole place is burning... '>.> Very nice

Dr. Wily II

Awesome... Ercuteak City, with all the Shining Leaves... 8D XD

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VixyNyan

It's a beautiful drawing. I love the leaves. It feels like Autumn already. ^^
Ibuki has a cute Pichu. and her yukata has cute flower patterns like Shaymin does~
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borockman

Very nice coloring beautiful leaves! and nice yukata!  owob


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Quote from: Blackhook on September 25, 2009, 08:55:09 PM
I thought for a second that the whole place is burning... '>.> Very nice
Same. XD

Anyways, the place looks beautiful. The ground, the tree and the house. And the girl's kimono is beautiful with flower patterns. Good job! ^^

Akira


Alice in Entropy

I see whut you did thar. 8D

Nice job, though! You really nailed the style. *Pets Osaka*

Blackhook

...Soooo....which one is the slowpoke?