Topic: Request [parasitic bomb] Here: The Thread

[Ryugaki]

She's your girlfriend. You should, by very definition, be able to tell her straight how you feel about everything, and that you're unhappy about your relationship. Don't cheat on her, cheating is the most rotten thing you can do in any kind of relationship, and it makes you not only the bad guy, but someone who likes to hurt. Just go and tell her truthfully how you feel, and tell her that if she isn't willing to change how she feels, you don't feel this relationship is worth pursuing.

okay...
I forgot to tell you that I've told her that...
anyway, thanks for helping...
that makes me more certain that all I have to do is just keep telling her what I feel...

mind if I ask for more advice?

[Bueno Excelente]

Be my guest.

[Ryugaki]

okay...

I'm about to create a fan-fiction
I already have the characters, the main story, etc.

but the problem is...
I don't know how to start it
and IF I'd already start it...
I don't know how to made the story into more interesting to read...

if you asked the genre of my fan-fiction, it have any single genre you could imagine (except "adult" thingy, since little kid also seemed to enjoy reading my Prologue, which I made just for fun, and actually have NO CONNECTION with the main story)

so please, help me...

[Bueno Excelente]

I'm not... exactly a fan of fanfictions. And from what you're telling me, it's the vaguest thing possible. First of all, there is no such thing as "no genre". There's always a given style, a certain kind of writing you use. Unless I know what you're trying to do in the first place, I can't give you any advice whatsoever.

I do give you one piece of advice. Get to work on your grammar.

[Ryugaki]

okay...
let's just say the genre is action-comedy-horror...

as for grammar...
I'm just an 11th grade student who has a bad score on English...
so, forgive me for any mistakes...

[Bueno Excelente]

Again, you didn't tell me what you're trying to do with the story in the first place.

Want good advice? Read a good book. Most people nowadays don't read, that's why they can't write well. As long as you read, you'll see how to write well, and you'll be able to type out any kind of quality narrative you want.

[Mirby]

There's a new Shannara book out; that's a great series to read.

[Bueno Excelente]

Smalltime.



Basis for good literature starts from the top.

[Mirby]

We want to ease him into it; if we start him with that, he won't read it. He's a junior in high school who has bad grades in English; odds are it's partially because he didn't read the books he should have such as Julius Caesar and Huckleberry Finn.

[Gaia]

Thanks. Just out of curiousity though, has anyone ever ripped the mugshots and common effects from PRINNY: CIRBTH? I am curious as to see why they stopped ripping stuff from that game (SE included)..

The request is still open if anyone wants to go ahead and try.

[Dantonumanoa Ongdolota Amycronicon]

The last Dostoevsky piece I read, The Idiot, I did not know what the hell was going on. One moment, it talks about a man visiting someone, then it talks about some heiress or something. WHAT THE HELL AM I SUPPOSED TO BE READING

[Bueno Excelente]

The last Dostoevsky piece I read, The Idiot, I did not know what the hell was going on. One moment, it talks about a man visiting someone, then it talks about some heiress or something. WHAT THE HELL AM I SUPPOSED TO BE READING

You're smalltime.

We want to ease him into it; if we start him with that, he won't read it. He's a junior in high school who has bad grades in English; odds are it's partially because he didn't read the books he should have such as Julius Caesar and Huckleberry Finn.

Then he should read those. Never too late to start.

[Mirby]

Nope, those are quite awesome stories...

[Hiryu]

Bah. Why read such doorknobs like Huckleberry Finn or Julius Caesar, when he can read the most popular book series among young adults today?



...That was definitely NOT what I was referring to. Well... unless you're a girl that's obsessed with vampires, which is a typical teenage girl nowadays.

Now this... THIS...



is Gold.

The last Dostoevsky piece I read, The Idiot, I did not know what the hell was going on. One moment, it talks about a man visiting someone, then it talks about some heiress or something. WHAT THE HELL AM I SUPPOSED TO BE READING

A book. You know, Literature? *ninja flash*

[Rin]

Wait... wait, wait, wait.
You want to write a FAN FICTION, and don't know how to start it?
Jesus... that sounds like me once upon a time.
I take it, you didn't write a carefully planned plot outline? You just have everything in your head, right?
If the answer is: YES, then... BACK THE HELL UP!
You gotta write those things down, man. EVERYTHING. Starting from character profiles(if you're using original charas, that is) and ending on the plot outline.
You can't just write from your head, because that's not how this [parasitic bomb] works. Not even in fanfiction.

If you do, however, have written a plot outline already... then just start writing. There's really nothing that stops you.
But as I said, I don't think you have it written out.
Tell us what this "story" or "fan fic" is supposed to be about? What series?
C'mon.

[Dantonumanoa Ongdolota Amycronicon]

A book. You know, Literature? *ninja flash*

It's so goddamn digressive.
Just when I think I get the feeling of what's happening, then it switches to another [tornado fang]ing story, and in all of this, there is no "the Idiot" to be seen.
GOD DAMN IT FYODOR WRITE SOMETHING THAT DOESN'T REQUIRE ME TO USE A [tornado fang]ing FLOWCHART

[Bueno Excelente]

It's so goddamn digressive.
Just when I think I get the feeling of what's happening, then it switches to another [tornado fang]ing story, and in all of this, there is no "the Idiot" to be seen.
GOD DAMN IT FYODOR WRITE SOMETHING THAT DOESN'T REQUIRE ME TO USE A [tornado fang]ing FLOWCHART

Learn to read the classics.

If you think it's too tough, try reading something else, by Fitzgerald or Hemingway, to start you up on national stuff, then move onto German and Russian literature.

[Dantonumanoa Ongdolota Amycronicon]

Learn to read the classics.

That's a given as far as I'm concerned. :/

[DjKlzonez]

Anyone knows what kind of paint can be used to paint a cellphone?

Actually, the orange part of this one
I'd like to change THAT ugly orange for a metallic blue. and i am too cheap to buy a new one.

[Sky Child]

Why don't you just buy a case for your phone?

[DjKlzonez]

Because the color i'm looking for DOESN'T exist for this model.

[Bueno Excelente]

Try those paints figures are painted with. Those are specially made for plastic, and very durable.

[Gaia]

Okay, diffrent request. I'd like a picture of a peice of bacon. KGO.

[Mirby]

and then there's this...
http://www.inquisitr.com/wp-content/bacon-bra-01.jpg

I won't do [img] for obvious reasons.

[Hiryu]

He said a PIECE of bacon. Not a ****ing mountain or a bra.