Megagirl R / ロックガール R (Official Wip Thread)

[Stardius]

I really like the Hotel, makes me feel bad for my own fortress 

Maybe Waltz will work as a maid in the hotel 

[Gatuca]

Maybe Waltz will work as a maid in the hotel  

She's only slightly older than Roll  

[spoiler] Waltz is going to have another castle
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[KudosForce]

She's only slightly older than Roll  

[spoiler] Waltz is going to have another castle
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Oh, really? I didn't know that.

Also...

YES!!!

[Stardius]

She's only slightly older than Roll  

Who could have guess? 

[Gatuca]

well, it's fully done now!

[newbalance84]

Virtual Man reminds me of Yo-Noid!

Also, excellent castle/resort.  I'm sure the bosses will be high-class...   

[KudosForce]

Ooh, quite classy.

That said, having shown it to HKLurch, here are his thoughts:

It's a great start for a castle, but it lacks some details which make it less "block-ish

[Gatuca]

Hmmmmmmmh, What details could it be?

[kokocipher]

what are you making your game in, Gatuca?

[CadmiumRED]

well, it's fully done now!

Personally, the skull needs a little more attention and the lines on the building are too thick.  You need to thin them.  Other than that, it's great!

[kokocipher]

The perspective on the side structures are messed up.  The middle mushroom structure is fine. 

[Gatuca]

Personally, the skull needs a little more attention and the lines on the building are too thick.  You need to thin them.  Other than that, it's great!

if you mean the black outlines, i made them tickier because they dint look good to me at first.

and i plan to do all my stuff and MMF2

Posted on: March 02, 2010, 03:36:15 AMFeather Woman Sprite-sheet

[KudosForce]

You did a great job on Feather Woman's intro, there. From the "Native American salute" to the outfit removal, it's nicely detailed.

Edit: As for what details Hotel Wily is lacking, here's what HKLurch18 told me:

just more little things, cannons, traps, towers, satellites, claws, the usual goodie stuff =)

[Gatuca]

well, i did re-edited the image a little bit, but to be honest, given the contemplated elements of the plot im thinkin and the fact that this is supposed to be an hotel, i wont add too much details, hope you understand.

Posted on: March 06, 2010, 06:18:38 AMI have a loooooooooooooot to done from now on

[spoiler][/spoiler]

[KudosForce]

Well, that's alright, Gatuca. At least, like this, the hotel will look less plain. I love the claws and fangs you added, by the way.

[spoiler][/spoiler]

Ohh, it looks pretty good, so far. I assume that the details (turrets, and such) will be added later on, yes?

[HKLurch18]

the hotel looks pretty cool, but what exactly is it's purpose? is it a hideout for a vallian disguised as a hotel? if so, it's cool, but you can add stuff like balcony's or a swimming pool, stuff like that to give it more detail =)

other than that, it looks awesome

[Gatuca]

I have a little update for you....

[spoiler]http://www.storm-artists.net/view/90175/[/spoiler]

EDIT: replaced with a line-art version

[Stardius]

Looks really great  I expecially love impressions on Megaman's and Wily's face 

[Mirby]

Virtual Man reminds me of Yo-Noid1!

Perhaps it was the Noid who should've stayed away from me...

Looks great! Keep it up!

[Gaia]

Roll's stickin' her tounge out while aiming, so it show's she's new to this in the fangame depo.

[KudosForce]

I really like the cover's draft, so far. I have a hunch that it will look pretty good, when it's finished!

The characters' expressions are pretty nice, here. Waltz is looking mighty fine there. Roll looks adorable. Not to mention that Pop/Virtual Man is in!

Anywho, the overall sense of design is pretty nice and professional-looking.

Oh, and at Mega Man's expression.

Roll's stickin' her tounge out while aiming, so it show's she's new to this in the fangame depo.

Well, of course! It is her first adventure, after all.

[Blackhook]

That does really look nice

[Gatuca]

just to let you know that i replaced the sketch with a line-art version with some changes

[KudosForce]

The new positioning of the heads may take some getting used to, but the cover drawing prototype still looks marvelous.

[Gatuca]

Hey guys, i was in the process of finishing the cover art, but i decided to do a "little game", i will post the PSD file so you can add details and who can do the best shading, just to see how good your skills are, i will post mine as well