Gaaaaahhhh...
There's another person on TFN who is looking for comments on his art, and it's...
...it needs some work. It's not terrible, but it's not very polished. There are proportion and anatomical issues, the linework lacks variance, and some of the pics are very flat. The coloring is... ehh.
The coloring could be the fault of the materials. He uses Crayola markers, which I use as well. However, I feel that he feels limited in what he can do with them. It is possible to blend those markers and make your colors look pretty decent, despite the markers being so meh. It just takes practice.
But, like many people I come across, this person's at a point in their art where I feel that they're fishing for compliments and would blow a gasket if someone dares to critique them. So, I'm going to ignore that art topic as well.
I feel bad for doing so, as I want to take this person under my wing and help them to grow. But, they don't seem like they'd be the type to let me, upon looking at their topic.