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Police Girl · **Reply #675 on:** March 21, 2011, 06:41:06 AM

[was I overdoing it?]

Blackhook · **Reply #676 on:** March 21, 2011, 06:44:23 AM

[A little..also using an actual anime character as your love interest...kinda derailing said character]

Police Girl · **Reply #677 on:** March 21, 2011, 06:49:31 AM

[Alternate versions? Jeez, I can't make original love interest characters. I mean, derailing characters from fiction/using them in odd situations is what Doujin writers do all the time. Also, could you tell me where I overdid it please? Improvement of my RP skill would be appreciated.]

Blackhook · **Reply #678 on:** March 21, 2011, 07:25:48 AM

[For a RP like this? Don´t try to overshadow other characters and go with the flow. If it makes for a good read then do it]

Police Girl · **Reply #679 on:** March 21, 2011, 07:45:41 AM

[Oh, well that makes sense. I've been trying to make my character less of a Mary Sue, though honestly I don't think that's working so well. I'll just try and continue what I'm trying to go with right now and see if I can get any sort of decent writing out of it.]

See-through stopped at the stands.

Snap out of your funk. You don't see me moping around just because my Sister is missing. You're too emotionally unstable.

Anarchy still, as he has been, sat there, not moving, not even trying to do anything.

If you had been taken instead of Stocking she would've already saved you by now. You gave up, you were within a few feet of saving her and you just gave up, you fell to your knees and let them remove you from the ship. You didn't even try to fight, You were completely [tornado fang]ing worthless up there, I could've saved her no problem, but you had to try and be reasonable about your actions, you need to man up and actually try to negotiate if you do [parasitic bomb] like that again, if not you need to fight. If you almost die trying it doesn't matter as long as you win the day! You need to be strong, but lately it seems like you're just pathetic.

Anarchy slowly got up, walked over to the stands where Stocking had been sitting, and sat next to her spot. His face, still, like it had been carved out of marble.

You're not even listening to me are you? You don't even talk and you're annoying!

Blackhook · **Reply #680 on:** March 21, 2011, 08:04:09 AM

Inside the Edeleisen.
Sonne and Schimmer managed to capture Scanty and Kneesocks (Since the two were more paying attention to their teabreak and locked them inside a prison cell.
"You will stay here untill miss Temnota decides what to do with you."
Said Schimmer and the two then returned to the bridge.

Temnota released Stocking from her shadow.
" It´s tiring to hold people inside my shadow..."
The whitehair kept watching Anarchy on her screen.
"...sigh, I am dissapointed..."

Police Girl · **Reply #681 on:** March 21, 2011, 08:09:14 AM

Stocking blinked and looked around.

Wh-where am I? Who are you? Why am I here? Where's Anarchy?

Blackhook · **Reply #682 on:** March 21, 2011, 01:57:58 PM

(..huh? we didn´t retcon that part...hehe, though we can make this even more interesting.)

Temnota looked at the girl with confusion
"What are you talking about? Have you alredy forgotten about this place? (Oh no...I hope my powers didn´t somehow mess up her memory...)"

The sparkvenian army has successfully defeated the majority of the attacking ghosts.
"Was this a planned invasion or was that just a random attack?"
Wonderred Silan since they haven´t found the ghost leader yet.

Anarchy was approached by Blackhook
"Hey there, where have you been? You heard the news?...huh? What´s wrong?"

Police Girl · **Reply #683 on:** March 21, 2011, 05:15:52 PM

Panty responded to Blackhook instead of Anarchy

Don't bother talking to him, he failed to save his Girlfriend and now he seems to have given up on everything...

Stocking looked at Temnota with slight worry.

I've never been here before, I need to leave, Wheres my hairbow?

Stocking panicked, and tried to find an exit.

Blackhook · **Reply #684 on:** March 21, 2011, 06:12:05 PM

The four knights returned to the Edeleisen's bridge.
"Reporting that we've taken care of the intruders!"
Reported Sieg.
"That's great and all, but everyone, we have to do the introduction routine!"
The knights were confused by that order but decided to obey anyway.
"Ok guys, you know what to do."
Sieg sweatdropped. The four knights and Temnota then proceeded to do a group pose.
"We are the noble judges of the great race of RPM!"
"*sigh* Ritter Sieg!"
"Ritter Sonne tee hee!"
"Ritterin Stolz!"
"R-Ritter Schimmer!"
"Temnota"
THe group did another set of poses before standing completely straith.
"Welcome onboard the Edeleisen.Here you are safe from the evil deeds of my collegue."
Proceeded Temnota.
"Also, you will be of great help for me to find out the truth about the so called 'Anarchy'...it wasn't that long since the marriage..."

(The marriage is still listed as a major arc of the previous Busy World so...no retconning for you

)

Police Girl · **Reply #685 on:** March 21, 2011, 07:00:43 PM

(It was a sub-arc to a main arc, If you read my first post in this RP you'll see why I "Retconned" it.)

Inside Anarchy's Psyche...

A man sits on a chair, its worn, slightly broken. The man is Anarchy, originally known as RMZX. A spotlight is cast on him, the rest of the area is nothing but complete darkness.

A question appears:

"Why do you fight?"

To protect the people I care for.

"Why have you lost your will to live?"

I've lost Stocking, theres nothing I can do to save her.

"You've lost somebody before."

No, I haven't.

"You've lost somebody before"

Yes, but I saved her.

"You've lost somebody before"

Yes, but I brought her back.

"How?"

She came back of her own will.

"How?"

She was brought back by me...

"How?"

I made a clone of her in case the original died. It was foolish of me.

"Why don't you try again?"

Because I don't want to.

"Why not?"

Because I felt no love for the clone.

"Why not?"

I didn't feel any emotional attachment.

"Why did you love Stocking?"

Stocking gave me my humanity back, I felt like I could be happy again, I felt I had somebody to protect, in the end, all I did was fail... again... I won't make the same mistakes I did last time, It'd be better if I didn't exist at all.

"You're Wrong"

No. I'm not.

Suddenly, apparitions of people Anarchy has known pop up in spotlights around him.

You don't even try more than once at anything, how could you be so sure she is dead?

Her hairbow was stained with blood.

You're really going to give up? Why did you even bother trying?

If you are going to try and run away from all of your problems then you will get nowhere.

A 4th apparition appeared, her red hair made her identity painfully obvious.

You don't even adknowledge the fact that I cared for you anymore. You seem to regret the time we spent together.

Because I couldn't save you from dying.

You would've been better off not getting involved in the first place! You felt like you had to be the big hero and all it did was get the one person you cared for killed! Then you made some shitty clone of me, you spat on my face essentially, You couldn't just keep me in your memories like a normal person. Now you have a chance to save your new loved one and you won't even go and save her!

I did try.

There is no Try.
There is only...
Success...
And Failure...

I don't want to carry this burden... I JUST WANT IT TO END!

Then end it...
End it all...
you're just going to let down everybody who cares for you. again.

Back in the outside world...

Hm, just as I figured. He appears to have gotten locked into a psychological stare-down. He can't save himself from his own BSoD.

[Oy, sorry bout that, I got NGE episodes 25 and 26 in my head. So I kinda did the same routine.]

Gaia · Quote from: Gaia on May 07, 2010, 12:30:32 AM

(Umm, just outta curiousity, was the orange text moi? Because it was prophesized, I did actually have friends (Anarchy Included) after the madness that was yester busy world)

Gaia: Ermm, what just happened now? God I need to stop taking these.

*throws a few energy cubes off the cliff*

Police Girl · **Reply #687 on:** March 21, 2011, 07:11:59 PM

[I actually don't know who orange text is, I thought it'd be nice to have somebody in there who isn't Panty, Stocking, or Kallen. So if you want, by all means feel free to consider yourself orange text.]

Blackhook · **Reply #688 on:** March 21, 2011, 07:52:12 PM

Blackhook offered his hand.The wind became stronger around the two.
"Grab my arm and stand up! You said you had your reasons for entering this race.Are you going to give up now, when it only started? Will you give up right after the first problam appears?"
Some flashbacks returned to Blackhook
("You want to fight Roa? You've guys have some guts. Well I guess I can give you this, it might come in handy."
Blackhook gave his gauntlet to a man who was acompanied by a red haired woman.)
The wind around them become even stronger.
"You can lose a lot, but noone can take away your heart and will, the only way to lose those is to throw them away! Now STAND UP!"

Silan pondered about the situation.
"It looks like those demons attacked not only Sparkvenia but RPM aswell. I don't want to handle this situation alone. I have no choice, in case it's a larger attack I have to contact Flame!"
Silan ordered her men to contact Flame.

Police Girl · **Reply #689 on:** March 21, 2011, 08:06:18 PM

Anarchy looked at Blackhook, his eyes were empty, but he stood up. He said nothing, however, as his motor functions and understanding of speech were fine, but his mind was still gone. It was like he was in some sort of "Auto-Pilot" mode.

Stocking was still on the airship.

Please, you have to let me leave. I need to be cheering on Anarchy, he needs me.

Blackhook · **Reply #690 on:** March 21, 2011, 08:22:29 PM

"You see that's..err..ah...I mean..."
Temnota was looking for the right words but then Sieg stepped into the conversation.
"Cheer on him? As far as I cen see the two of you shouldn't have even met to begin with. The boy doesn't need you, he needs something else since you can't always be there for him."

"Your body is standing..but what is fueling it? An soulless body shouldn't exist."
The surrounding wind started gathering around BH's right arm.
"You flame has been put out, I guess I have no choice. Even if I have to use force, I will put the fire on!"
BH prepared a punch.
"SCHLAG DER VERNUNFT!"
BH's used an uppercut on Anarchy and sent him flying towards the sky.
"Reach the sky!"

Police Girl · **Reply #691 on:** March 21, 2011, 08:37:34 PM

Stocking was taken aback by Sieg's words.
He doesn't need me? Why in the world would you say that? I'll always be there for him, I care for him. Besides, what else would he need? He has somebody that loves him and he has friends, he is happy.

Anarchy soared through the sky, while in his psyche.

Its time.
You need to go back now.
Reawaken and save what you care for.
Do it for all of us. The world needs you.

I guess... If I'm needed, then I must go. Farewell.

Anarchy's eyes lit up. he spun in the air and managed to make himself less aerodynamic using his cloak to break his descent.
He landed on the ground perfectly.

Lets go.

Oh hey, would you look at that. He's back.

Gaia · Quote from: Gaia on May 07, 2010, 12:30:32 AM

(I think RMZX needs to watch Kore Wa Zombie Desu Ka? It may be UNBELIVEABLY whacked out, but it should give him an idea how to keep a character that's already dead amognst the living.. then again, Garterbelt died once, and became a missionary and thereafter following a surreal resurrection. So there's two options there~)

As the retonconga event continues to happen places here and there.. poofed, vanished, as if rectonned from a story. The monsters began heading home too, since there is no longer a purpose for them to stay here. Athlough, a few decided to make their stay and continue havoc. As the ones currently attacking Sparkervania AND RPM, while the Protector continues to fight the remainder of the monsters, hoping to find their leader.

Blackhook · **Reply #693 on:** March 21, 2011, 09:13:00 PM

(The only retconned thing was COrset appearing on the ship >.<

"Now I can't wait for the next phase of the race."
Said BH and returned to his little boat.
---
Many people noticed the little 'conversation' between Anarchy and BH.
Adante:"Miii,miii? I wonder what happened? Oh well never mind. It doesn't concern miiiiii ♪"
Sachertorte:"Ok Pfeferkuchen, this round will be our. You see that guy? I will get his head."
Turbo X540: "Another flashy one? My fireworks will rule the next round!"
Spark 5(in unision):"SPARK JUSTICE!"
---
Troll Rex was all fired up for the next round.
"Ok little one, next race is our! Hey, how about when we get close to finish, me throw you so we win faster?"
---
A. Silan - who is using the alias Nalis - did the last upgrades on hers and Afroman's vehicles.
"Mr. Afro? I felt a slight disturbance? You felt that?"
---
Silan:"You still have no contact to Flame?!I need to return to the stadium!"
Sparkvenia soldier:"Don't worry misstress, you won't have to wait any longer. We know his position, we can contact him now..."
---
On the Edeleisen
"Misstress Silan explained dimensional travel to me."
Continued Sieg.
"I don't care about love or any foolish emotions like that. I just know that people shouldn't meddle with other dimensions. It's for this reason this universe went trough a 'reset' just recently..."

Police Girl · **Reply #694 on:** March 21, 2011, 09:20:58 PM

How does that have anything to do with him needing me?

Stocking, now extremely frustrated at the Knights apparent lack of explaining answers, Changed one of her stockings into her Angelic Katana, Stripes I.

Now if you'll excuse me, I have somewhere I need to be.

Stocking walked towards the door and left through the hole Anarchy busted through.

Blackhook · **Reply #695 on:** March 21, 2011, 09:30:33 PM

"Idiot, he cannot rely on you...you leave and you'll die..or maybe something worse."
Continued Sieg.
"But unlike misstress Temnota here, we aren't concerned about that.Neither do we care about the man. Remember though, if your presence somehow disturbs this place...we won't show any mercy.It's not like you can do anything against it, since your weapon cannot harm us anyway."

"B-but Sieg! You can't let her just go like that!"
Argued Temnota

"Miss Temnota, you shouldn't have meddled with them in the first place. Mr. Adante can do whatever he feels like...but you, you got orders from Misstress Silan. Your job is to be a judge, nothing more."

Police Girl · **Reply #696 on:** March 21, 2011, 09:38:59 PM

Stocking walked to the exit, she noticed the door was wide open, and that a drill had been jammed into the hull.

So he was here, I knew he would try to save me. But they must've tossed him down or something.

She jumped off the airship and floated down gently, Landing behind the stands.

Gaia · Quote from: Gaia on May 07, 2010, 12:30:32 AM

At that moment, Gaia was also at the stands, after he threw out the supposedly rigged Energy Cubes, unaware that some leftover monsters have been wreaking havoc on RPM and Sparkervania. He then sees a familiar person.

Gaia: Ah, Stocking! Everyone's been hunting you down like madmen! It was crazy too.

Police Girl · **Reply #698 on:** March 22, 2011, 12:52:10 AM

[Oh [tornado fang]ing firefox, I had my whole post written out and The damn thing closed out for no reason.]

Anarchy heard Gaia say something about Stocking, he blinked in disbelief.

Impossible.... Stocking?

Before he could turn around to look for her, he felt somebody hug him from behind.

Anarchy! You're OK! I thought they got rid of you! I was worried.

I'm the one who should be worried, I thought you were dead... When I got on the ship I didn't find you and that Tenmota woman threw me into a teleport pod.

I think she kept me hidden in her shadow, it was cold... and Dark...
So it did involve her, stupid [sonic slicer] tried to throw me off.

Anarchy then stopped, and reached into his pocket.

Before I forget, here. Its a little stained, but It should be fine.

He handed her the Hair Ribbon she had lost.

I was going to keep it with me as a memory if I was never going to see you again, but you're here now. So I have no need to hold onto it anymore.

You didn't really think I was dead, did you?

Stocking quickly put her bow back in her hair.

I did, but that doesn't matter now since you're here now.....

Thanks for holding onto it for me. Now you have a race to go to, don't you?

Indeed I do.

Well, good luck. You're going to need it.

Anarchy smiled, then in an act of impulse he pulled stocking close and gave her a kiss.

Sorry, I don't know what came over me.

Stocking just giggled a little.

I'll be here for you when you get back, don't worry about me. I'll be fine, I have cheesecake to keep me company.

Anarchy Smiled again, then he dashed off to the location of the next race.

Gaia · Quote from: Gaia on May 07, 2010, 12:30:32 AM

Gaia then asked Anarchy a question.

Gaia: Well, now that's over and done with, there should be at least NO interruptions, no?

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