I kinda miss the frosty tipped hair, but regardless, it does look much better now.
I agree, that pendant is nice
Actually I forgot to add the Frost Tips on the hair but it's still going to be there, but thank you! I did my best to make it come out natural and good.
Also here's some more drawings for my character, Ami Rozu...
Ami Rozu - Eyeless Sketch:
This is a sketch of my main heroine, Ami Rozu, of my manga project that I drew about 5 days ago. This one is different as I left this drawing
without any eyes on her as I was looking for the right type of eyes to be perfect for her Tsundere nature. I still need some more work on her,
but I did change up her forehead bangs a bit.
Yeah, I know another pink-haired tsundere character but I like them and this is how I imagine her to be. The eyes all around her are examples
I was doing ranging from realistic to more anime-ish or cartoonish eyes that could be her eyes and simple practice on my part.
Think you can help me? Which pair of eyes do you think looks best on Ami?
Ami Rozu Sketch 083011:
Here's another drawing of Ami Rozu, my main heroine of my manga project, that I did today in about 30 minutes.
I think she came out great, better than what I previous drew, but I did some reference to draw her like this by looking at a certain character
and the art style but changing it up to match my style and Ami's look. I love how her bangs came out this time and looks better than what I
originally had.
Just a little rough sketch, and I'm trying to figure out Ami's measurements right now... not to sound perverted by Ami's chest size is about
D-Cup or between that and C-Cup size. Yeah, that definitely didn't sound perverted at all!
What do you guys think?
As I mention above she's one of the main characters of my manga project I'm coming up with! Though I planned from the start to call it "VirusChris" to refer to the main character, which is where my username is based from, of the story though I'm also thinking of "Virakin" or "Virakins" as another alternative for the title as it references to the species in my story as they're in the main focus. Though the plan was if I ever made a sequel to this series it would be called "VirusNova", which is sequel I kinda have plan to have if I wanted to expand the story more, which focuses on the new main character of the same title... so it's called the "Virus" series though if I want to the "Virakin" title I'll probably have to come up with a sub-title of it or called it "Virakin 2" though not a very good manga title.
I really changed up the story and settings more than what I originally wanted to do in the beginning, originally the setting was in a modern day world like ours but the world was different (there was a West and East America and North and South Japan) as the planet Earth was the 4th planet from the Sun and it had a different name and only humans existed on the planet with somewhat more advanced computers and gadgets but mostly the same. Chris Yuushi, the main character, is from a somewhat wealthy family (unlike me) with butler and maid who he treats as family and dislikes being called "Master Chris" or "Young Master Yuushi" and his parents are away on business though he's dad is there at the start before he leaves.
Now what I changed the old one to a new setting that the world or planet is called "Magleutix" (pronounced as Ma-g-lou-tix, the "Ma" like the first part of Mana) and the world is inhabited by Humans, Elves, and Youkai as they all live in peaceful co-existence with each other as there are many Half-Human, Half-Elf, and Half-Youkai people walking around as well though they're some crimes still. The main city has a giant tree in the middle of it but the buildings look sorted like ours but most of the city is like in a giant Elven forest with an Oni Kingdom nearby it to protect it.
The main character, Chris Yuushi, is more or less a normal boy living a normal life but he sadly gets picked on but it doesn't bother him as he's always cheerful and looks on the bright side of things and does have a few friends, including an elf girl named Iris Levair and an Oni princess Kami (I kept on forgetting the rest of her name but all her family members have "Kami" as their first part). However they're simply friends as Ami Rozu is Chris' love interest. He does have a butler and maid still by they live to serve as repayment for Chris' parents saving them by some sort of incident and his father is still there in the beginning giving him parting words and leaving on business.
At the very start of the story the Nazo Virus, a Virakin's basic or original form, soars through the night sky looking for its "compatible host" and mentions almost locating it and flies off with the scene switches to a group watching it as the group's leader asks his two officers to go and retrieve it. Then it switches over to the city and then the school with the main character is as it's letting the students go home.
I'm still a little unsure about how Chris comes in contact with the Nazo Virus and merges with it, but it involves him getting wounded badly (not fatally though) and the Nazo Virus asking him if it wants to merge with it as it will grant him powers but it also mentions about the dangers with getting involved with it and consequences of using its power but still says the choice is his if he wants to or not. Though Chris understands and merges with it to becomes a Virakin, and after that the two who were sent after it begin to fight with Chris... which ends with Chris being defeated after putting up a good fight though he's lack of experience and his unable to control his powers yet didn't play in his favor as the two proceed to capture and the first chapter ends there. However I'm unsure if I want to leave it there or have Vincent Dirge, another Virakin, appear and stand in front of the two other Virakin from capturing Chris.
The Virus part of the name is a honorific like the Japanese with "-kun", "-chan", and "-san" but is added to the front of the name of the person. Also Virus and Chris sort of rhyme together (Japanese is Uirusu Kurisu) so he's nicknamed or simply called "Virus" from short.
What do you think? Do you think it has potential to become a great manga story? I trying to capture the same kind of action of Dragon Ball Z as it's one of many different sources to inspire me to create this manga series I have planned out, though I'm trying to add my own kind of flair to it. Though it's an original English manga series is going to be written and read as Right-to-Left just like the regular Japanese ones as a manga is meant to be read that way and I want to draw it that way. It's my own story and that's how I want it to be like.
Though I'm unsure if I want to add a little sister for him, who is going to be called Arianna Yuushi and is 2 years younger than Chris, a playfully bubbly girl but I hardly have no story important plots for her though I could make so up for her.