Alright I did what you said about showing the forehead a bit more, and through trial and error and got this:
Here's another sketch of Chris Corona. Just working on his
head a bit more, and the hair as Quickman suggested to show
the forehead a bit and it makes him look better now.
As you can see I was messing over with the hair, trying my
best to make it look right until I thought about moving it
down a bit and behind part of the head. And it looks just like
how I envision the hair to appear.
My drawing's getting there to being a professional-level
drawing. Anyway any feedback on my drawing? How is it?
Something else I need to improve more on?