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Reply #350 on: March 01, 2010, 04:44:57 PM
I really like the Hotel, makes me feel bad for my own fortress  XD

Maybe Waltz will work as a maid in the hotel  >w<



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Reply #351 on: March 01, 2010, 05:38:35 PM

Maybe Waltz will work as a maid in the hotel  >w<

She's only slightly older than Roll  B(

[spoiler] Waltz is going to have another castle
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Reply #352 on: March 01, 2010, 05:41:17 PM
She's only slightly older than Roll  B(

[spoiler] Waltz is going to have another castle
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Oh, really? I didn't know that.

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Reply #353 on: March 01, 2010, 06:22:33 PM
She's only slightly older than Roll  B(

Who could have guess?  8D



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Reply #354 on: March 01, 2010, 07:19:32 PM
well, it's fully done now!


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Reply #355 on: March 01, 2010, 08:53:34 PM
Virtual Man reminds me of Yo-Noid!

Also, excellent castle/resort.  I'm sure the bosses will be high-class...   ;)



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Reply #356 on: March 01, 2010, 11:58:34 PM
Ooh, quite classy. owob

That said, having shown it to HKLurch, here are his thoughts:

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It's a great start for a castle, but it lacks some details which make it less "block-ish



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Reply #357 on: March 02, 2010, 12:36:18 AM
Hmmmmmmmh, What details could it be?

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Reply #358 on: March 02, 2010, 01:51:13 AM
what are you making your game in, Gatuca?


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Reply #359 on: March 02, 2010, 01:58:08 AM
well, it's fully done now!


Personally, the skull needs a little more attention and the lines on the building are too thick.  You need to thin them.  Other than that, it's great!

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Reply #360 on: March 02, 2010, 02:57:14 AM
The perspective on the side structures are messed up.  The middle mushroom structure is fine. 


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Reply #361 on: March 02, 2010, 08:13:01 PM
Personally, the skull needs a little more attention and the lines on the building are too thick.  You need to thin them.  Other than that, it's great!

if you mean the black outlines, i made them tickier because they dint look good to me at first.

and i plan to do all my stuff and MMF2

Posted on: March 02, 2010, 03:36:15 AM
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Reply #362 on: March 02, 2010, 09:34:38 PM
You did a great job on Feather Woman's intro, there. From the "Native American salute" to the outfit removal, it's nicely detailed. owo

Edit: As for what details Hotel Wily is lacking, here's what HKLurch18 told me:

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just more little things, cannons, traps, towers, satellites, claws, the usual goodie stuff =)



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Reply #363 on: March 06, 2010, 07:14:15 AM


well, i did re-edited the image a little bit, but to be honest, given the contemplated elements of the plot im thinkin and the fact that this is supposed to be an hotel, i wont add too much details, hope you understand.

Posted on: March 06, 2010, 06:18:38 AM
I have a loooooooooooooot to done from now on

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Reply #364 on: March 06, 2010, 02:12:50 PM
Well, that's alright, Gatuca. At least, like this, the hotel will look less plain. ;) I love the claws and fangs you added, by the way.

[spoiler][/spoiler]

Ohh, it looks pretty good, so far. owob I assume that the details (turrets, and such) will be added later on, yes?



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Reply #365 on: March 07, 2010, 05:43:21 PM
the hotel looks pretty cool, but what exactly is it's purpose? is it a hideout for a vallian disguised as a hotel? if so, it's cool, but you can add stuff like balcony's or a swimming pool, stuff like that to give it more detail =)

other than that, it looks awesome :)



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Reply #366 on: March 10, 2010, 10:17:13 PM
I have a little update for you....

[spoiler]http://www.storm-artists.net/view/90175/[/spoiler]

EDIT: replaced with a line-art version
« Last Edit: March 12, 2010, 12:02:47 AM by Gatuca »

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Reply #367 on: March 10, 2010, 10:23:14 PM
Looks really great  owob I expecially love impressions on Megaman's and Wily's face  XD



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Reply #368 on: March 10, 2010, 10:37:23 PM
Virtual Man reminds me of Yo-Noid1!
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Reply #369 on: March 10, 2010, 10:52:53 PM
Roll's stickin' her tounge out while aiming, so it show's she's new to this in the fangame depo.

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Reply #370 on: March 11, 2010, 12:38:39 AM
I really like the cover's draft, so far. owob I have a hunch that it will look pretty good, when it's finished!

The characters' expressions are pretty nice, here. Waltz is looking mighty fine there. :3 Roll looks adorable. Not to mention that Pop/Virtual Man is in! 8)

Anywho, the overall sense of design is pretty nice and professional-looking.

Oh, and XD at Mega Man's expression.

Roll's stickin' her tounge out while aiming, so it show's she's new to this in the fangame depo.

Well, of course! It is her first adventure, after all. ;)



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Reply #371 on: March 11, 2010, 06:56:09 AM
That does really look nice


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Reply #372 on: March 12, 2010, 12:03:43 AM
just to let you know that i replaced the sketch with a line-art version with some changes

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Reply #373 on: March 12, 2010, 01:05:09 AM
The new positioning of the heads may take some getting used to, but the cover drawing prototype still looks marvelous. :D



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Reply #374 on: March 13, 2010, 10:28:32 PM
Hey guys, i was in the process of finishing the cover art, but i decided to do a "little game", i will post the PSD file so you can add details and who can do the best shading, just to see how good your skills are, i will post mine as well

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