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I think that, as it is, Hotel Wily looks decent enough.  But still, I must ask: Will Waltz get her own castle? |
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I really like the Hotel, makes me feel bad for my own fortress  Maybe Waltz will work as a maid in the hotel  |
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Gatuca
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Maybe Waltz will work as a maid in the hotel She's only slightly older than Roll  Waltz is going to have another castle
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She's only slightly older than Roll Waltz is going to have another castle
Oh, really? I didn't know that. Also... YES!!!  |
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She's only slightly older than Roll Who could have guess?  |
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Gatuca
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well, it's fully done now!  |
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Virtual Man reminds me of Yo-Noid! Also, excellent castle/resort. I'm sure the bosses will be high-class...  |
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Ooh, quite classy.  That said, having shown it to HKLurch, here are his thoughts: It's a great start for a castle, but it lacks some details which make it less "block-ish |
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Hmmmmmmmh, What details could it be?
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what are you making your game in, Gatuca?
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Personally, the skull needs a little more attention and the lines on the building are too thick. You need to thin them. Other than that, it's great! |
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"The fact that I myself do not understand what my paintings mean while I am painting them does not imply that they are meaningless." - Salvador Dali
"Do not be afraid of perfection - you will never attain it." - Salvador Dali |
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The perspective on the side structures are messed up. The middle mushroom structure is fine.
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Gatuca
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Personally, the skull needs a little more attention and the lines on the building are too thick. You need to thin them. Other than that, it's great!
if you mean the black outlines, i made them tickier because they dint look good to me at first. and i plan to do all my stuff and MMF2 Posted on: March 02, 2010, 03:36:15 AM
Feather Woman Sprite-sheet  |
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You did a great job on Feather Woman's intro, there. From the "Native American salute" to the outfit removal, it's nicely detailed.  Edit: As for what details Hotel Wily is lacking, here's what HKLurch18 told me: just more little things, cannons, traps, towers, satellites, claws, the usual goodie stuff =) |
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 well, i did re-edited the image a little bit, but to be honest, given the contemplated elements of the plot im thinkin and the fact that this is supposed to be an hotel, i wont add too much details, hope you understand. Posted on: March 06, 2010, 06:18:38 AM
I have a loooooooooooooot to done from now on |
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Well, that's alright, Gatuca. At least, like this, the hotel will look less plain. I love the claws and fangs you added, by the way. Ohh, it looks pretty good, so far. I assume that the details (turrets, and such) will be added later on, yes? |
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the hotel looks pretty cool, but what exactly is it's purpose? is it a hideout for a vallian disguised as a hotel? if so, it's cool, but you can add stuff like balcony's or a swimming pool, stuff like that to give it more detail =) other than that, it looks awesome  |
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I have a little update for you.... EDIT: replaced with a line-art version |
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« Last Edit: March 12, 2010, 12:02:47 AM by Gatuca »
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Stardius
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Looks really great I expecially love impressions on Megaman's and Wily's face |
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Virtual Man reminds me of Yo-Noid1!
Perhaps it was the Noid who should've stayed away from me...
Looks great! Keep it up! |
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Roll's stickin' her tounge out while aiming, so it show's she's new to this in the fangame depo.
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I really like the cover's draft, so far. I have a hunch that it will look pretty good, when it's finished! The characters' expressions are pretty nice, here. Waltz is looking mighty fine there.  Roll looks adorable. Not to mention that Pop/Virtual Man is in!  Anywho, the overall sense of design is pretty nice and professional-looking. Oh, and at Mega Man's expression. Roll's stickin' her tounge out while aiming, so it show's she's new to this in the fangame depo. Well, of course! It is her first adventure, after all. |
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That does really look nice
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Gatuca
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just to let you know that i replaced the sketch with a line-art version with some changes
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