Okay I just want to say some things Akira.
First of all I think your anatomy is broken in a way. Moon tits and girls with no organs isn't gonna fly if you want a job in art.
I'm not trying to be mean but I'm just trying to be truthful. Also, I'd really like to see something different from you that's not Pokemon or Vidya Gaems or, yeah I'm gonna say it, Vixy.
Interpret a favorite song.
Draw yourself with someone you admire.
Try gesture drawing.
I'd really like to see you try something different and challenge yourself instead of seeing the same thing over and over. Besides varying a portfolio will definitely be an eye catcher to businesses or whoever wants to hire you.
Although I will say keep up the coloring techniques, nice and smooth colors are always a plus~
I know, I need to fix many thinks , Nobody it is perfect, and Kitsu, drawing it is only my Hobby, I'm styuding other thing, I know I need to do many changes in my drawings, 5 years ago I could not draw girls,it is a process, and it's hard, I do not have all the time in the world, this is just my hobby, but also need to study, and now I'm not in the best mood for the earthquake thing, I'm really nervous and sad, I like critics, but not in this moment, please.