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Cpie · **Reply #925 on:** September 19, 2009, 11:18:27 PM

What's C+C? : o

Gaia · Quote from: Gaia on May 07, 2010, 12:30:32 AM

Both spriters and artist's term for Constructive Critisism. basically.

CephiYumi · **Reply #927 on:** September 20, 2009, 02:56:56 AM

Quote from: Gaia on September 19, 2009, 10:53:29 PM

C+C

not really sure what the + is for o.o
but great games and great drawing ^^

borockman · **Reply #928 on:** September 20, 2009, 03:54:18 AM

Quote from: Akira on September 19, 2009, 10:59:01 PM

I only draw on paper, and I've never said that I was perfect in the drawing.
draw on paper, means, a double-edged work.

Oh, this is the painful truth. I just know too well. (especially me the pen guy)

Quickman · **Reply #929 on:** September 20, 2009, 06:40:31 AM

I was told by artist Mike Hawthorne that the most unhelpful kind of comments you can get are the ones where everyone says everything is perfect. Artists need critiques. It is the only way they can improve.

That said, the colouring and linework are nice as usual. However, Jill's right (her right, your left) hand seems a bit off. What will help is to either use your own hand to reference from or have someone model for you. Hands are very tricky to draw. The background is pretty, though.

Dr. Wily II · **Reply #930 on:** September 20, 2009, 08:13:17 AM

Still, that looks really good.

Akira · **Reply #931 on:** September 20, 2009, 08:31:37 PM

Quote from: Quickman on September 20, 2009, 06:40:31 AM

I was told by artist Mike Hawthorne that the most unhelpful kind of comments you can get are the ones where everyone says everything is perfect. Artists need critiques. It is the only way they can improve.

That said, the colouring and linework are nice as usual. However, Jill's right (her right, your left) hand seems a bit off. What will help is to either use your own hand to reference from or have someone model for you. Hands are very tricky to draw. The background is pretty, though.

Thankies Quickie, I know ^^,your criticism is different from the criticisms of Gaia,and I appreciate that too.

Gaia · Quote from: Gaia on May 07, 2010, 12:30:32 AM

Quote from: Akira on September 20, 2009, 08:31:37 PM

Thankies Quickie, I know ^^,your criticism is different from the criticisms of Gaia

Safe to say that I'm not much of an artist, but more of a spriter (growing into a pixel artist slowly if I can break some habits), yeh. I apologize for the crit I gave you then. Also, do you have an anatomy chart on you? that'd be nice. ^^

Cpie · **Reply #933 on:** September 20, 2009, 09:41:50 PM

Quote from: Akira on September 20, 2009, 08:31:37 PM

Thankies Quickie, I know ^^,your criticism is different from the criticisms of Gaia,and I appreciate that too.

Pfft I can't see how Gaia's criticism was harsh haha He basically said the same think as Quickie.

Quote from: Quickman on September 20, 2009, 06:40:31 AM

I was told by artist Mike Hawthorne that the most unhelpful kind of comments you can get are the ones where everyone says everything is perfect. Artists need critiques. It is the only way they can improve.

Thank GOD someone understands!

VixyNyan · **Reply #934 on:** September 20, 2009, 09:58:30 PM

Quickie was more friendly with her criticism, noting things about the drawing and the coloring. And of course we artists need critique. We don't like criticism that is put out in a rude or weird attitude way. Besides, the legs are fine, specially because Pulsie does bend his leg like that. Jill's hand might not have the right length on the fingers and they seem a bit separate from each other. It's kinda tough to fix these changes on paper, specially when using darker ink colors, because it won't be easy erasing those tiny slip-ups, remember. Akira doesn't have the digital tools to fix these small things. I respect him for doing his best on the drawing and blending a lot of colors in, giving a bright and colorful result. ^^

Cpie · **Reply #935 on:** September 20, 2009, 10:19:41 PM

.. nevermiiind

Alice in Entropy · **Reply #936 on:** September 20, 2009, 10:49:13 PM

I like it, personally. =3 Though I do like colourful art, so I may be a wee bit biased.

I can't really offer C+C myself, since my style is vastly different and probably full of what people would call "little mistakes". I admire people who draw in their own way, especially if they can draw without the help of this new-fangled technomological jibber-jabberings.

Gaia · Quote from: Gaia on May 07, 2010, 12:30:32 AM

Quote from: Nick Z. Rythm on September 20, 2009, 10:49:13 PM

I can't really offer C+C myself, since my style is vastly different and probably full of what people would call "little mistakes".

*whew* At least someone understands my problems (other than I can't reach the dern scanner because it's occupied most of the time). It's also how you handle the C+C, as some people don't take it rather well, so it could be one of the reasons why Akira thought mine was a little more harsh than Quick's.

Akira · **Reply #938 on:** September 25, 2009, 08:41:50 PM

OK OK ,I will not argue with anyone ^^.

New art!

http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn194/Akira_Corp/EnjuCity.png

Cpie · **Reply #939 on:** September 25, 2009, 08:46:23 PM

Those tree leaves are amazing!

Well done!

Protoman Blues · **Reply #940 on:** September 25, 2009, 08:48:34 PM

CYNDAQUIL!

CephiYumi · **Reply #941 on:** September 25, 2009, 08:52:19 PM

the leaves are very good, and such pretty flower pattern ^o^

Blackhook · **Reply #942 on:** September 25, 2009, 08:55:09 PM

I thought for a second that the whole place is burning...

Very nice

Dr. Wily II · **Reply #943 on:** September 25, 2009, 09:02:45 PM

Awesome... Ercuteak City, with all the Shining Leaves...

VixyNyan · **Reply #944 on:** September 26, 2009, 01:46:49 AM

It's a beautiful drawing. I love the leaves. It feels like Autumn already. ^^
Ibuki has a cute Pichu. and her yukata has cute flower patterns like Shaymin does~

borockman · **Reply #945 on:** September 26, 2009, 05:02:56 AM

Very nice coloring beautiful leaves! and nice yukata!

Sniper X · **Reply #946 on:** September 26, 2009, 09:59:57 AM

Quote from: Blackhook on September 25, 2009, 08:55:09 PM

I thought for a second that the whole place is burning... Very nice

Same.

Anyways, the place looks beautiful. The ground, the tree and the house. And the girl's kimono is beautiful with flower patterns. Good job! ^^

Akira · **Reply #947 on:** October 10, 2009, 10:34:00 PM

HI RPM!

Little update...

... What?

http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn194/Akira_Corp/What-1.png

Alice in Entropy · **Reply #948 on:** October 10, 2009, 10:44:36 PM

I see whut you did thar.

Nice job, though! You really nailed the style. *Pets Osaka*

Blackhook · **Reply #949 on:** October 10, 2009, 10:50:34 PM

...Soooo....which one is the slowpoke?

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