Man how can a Megaman Battle Network Fanfiction that already has 85 characters be so bad? There are 6 reasons.
1. Because it uses game physics where they mention buying and finding items like HPmems and Mystry Data yeah not a good idea.
2. It uses insane amount of crossovers like Tokyo Mew Mew, Wedding Peach, Sailor Moon and etc but still keeps Tokyo Mew Mew in every saga and switches out the others oh and just to let you know they used Sailor Moon and Wedding Peach in the same saga which leads to reason 3.
3. All the girls sleep in Lan's room. Yeah shouldn't Mrs. Hikari be concerned that Lan brings home like 5 to 10 girls with him then asks if they could live with him and then let them sleep in his tiny room? Oh and get this she also got them to be students (or a teacher) in one day dude that takes time especialy getting a job for a teacher I mean you have to at least go to college and learn about on subject, and have a degree on it and none of the girls know much about the dimension they got sucked into.
4. The relationships aren't realistic. I mean Roll is kinda of the jealous type (as seen in the anime) and 2 girls should not be dating the same man. Plus if Lan is 11 he should be dense about Maylu having feelings for him not writing love poems.
5. And probably worse of all the battles are too short. Seriously they are only a paragraph long and not only that after the battle they get the navi chips that should not even exisit in Fan Fiction, if they didn't exist in the manga or anime don't do it.
6. Bad format of writing, the writer doesn't space out some paragraghs that need to be spaced out and sometimes they have the characters talk in the same line like this " ", " " instead of this:
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And also sometimes words are even missing in the sentances.
Sorry for another long rant again if someone actually reads this I'll give them 5 cookies.