Supper Flying Ribbit?
Read the entire thing. Final verdict? I liked it.
You have a solid grasp of the English language as patronising as that sounds, it's a compliment, you won't believe the amount of people who can't type in proper English despite it being their native language and your writing has a natural flow as natural as RS MegaMan gets at least.
It also made me giggle and entertained me as I read through it so I guess it retains the charm of the original.
Oh and your shameless references are completely shameless
For the first episode, I enjoyed it a lot, but Proto's Face Heel Turn felt way too forced and contrived. There should've been more plot buildup/backstory before making it happen imo.
Episode one also was in desperate need of a beta reader.
Also, I like how Good is Dumb.
Also, in the first 2 episodes, your exposition sections are a lot weaker than the action scenes. The characters feel a lot less in character and the entire sections feel dull and obligatory. This doesn't happen in the 3rd episode though, so I'm guessing that it won't be a problem.
Out of all the episodes, I think episode 2 is the weakest. It seemed like you were frustrated at your own writing and you just kept going on with the story because you had to introduce Bass into the story.
Also come to think of it, aren't you giving us a bit too much fanservice? =w=;a Well, I guess your version is pretty much what fans want...which is a good thing, I guess...
Oh yeah! The episodes feel a bit long~ I'm not exactly too sure how long they would be, but that's just how I feel. You can see approximately how long they would be if you cleaned up the script a bit (not saying they're bad, just that as a professional script you wouldn't want to have your own discussions in the middle of it) and used it in a professional script format. In that way, 1 page will be 1 minute, and you can see how long your script is.