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Forum Games / Re: "What Are You Thinking Now?"
« on: April 09, 2009, 01:11:50 AM »
"Man I can't believe I french kissed for the first time yesterday, and my boyfriend said I wasn't half bas."
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Forum Games / Re: Make up a Crazy Lie about the Above Poster
« on: April 07, 2009, 01:01:27 AM »
He used to be a chunk of cheese.
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Forum Games / Re: "What Are You Thinking Now?"
« on: April 06, 2009, 02:25:37 AM »
Well I can give my character's, a little of my boyfriend's, Wiz's personallities right away in a PM but you'll have to wait a few days for the others. Plus we are going to go out of order with the worlds we go to and add some such as Legend of Zelda, Megaman X and stuff like that.
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Fan Creations / Re: Rebirth of the Rockman-Themed Stolen *Bleep* Thread!!
« on: April 06, 2009, 02:19:38 AM »
Anyone know when I can watch the Saber Marionette episodes without downloading the episodes because You Tube only had about 8 dubed episodes. I don't mind if it's dubed but I would like to watch it, because the manga I read seems pretty bad.
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Forum Games / Re: "What Are You Thinking Now?"
« on: April 06, 2009, 02:16:42 AM »EDIT: Wow, that was quick.
I could only stand to read the first couple of paragraphs before I lost interest, honestly. I mean, what the hell is up with Travis Town?
The conversations, from what I read, were bland at best. No humor or wit in them to say the least. Plus the fact that he chose to take a pre-exisitng story with pre-existing characters in them and adding fan characters would just lead to a jumbled mess of "Who the hell is supposed to be the hero of this thing?"
It would have been better if you took the Kingdom Hearts universe and made your own story within it, only including characters from the series in the form of cameos.
I might be a little harsh, but I honestly didn't feel immersed in the story in any way what so ever.
Take this as you will. Call me a harsh [Bumpity-Boom!] if you want to. Thems just my two cents.
And those "Before and After" conversations at the begining and the end? UGH.
I know it's supposed to be like that a little later and Sora being a big annoyannce and pretty much non-existant in the second part but you see what I mean. I'll try to change it if I get the premission to edit it, but could you help me a little because I'm not so good with dialouge either.
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Fan Creations / Re: Rebirth of the Rockman-Themed Stolen *Bleep* Thread!!
« on: April 06, 2009, 01:20:53 AM »No, Bloodberry from SMR always had dark blue hair. The girls in SMR are not the same from the SMJ despite their names. Especially considering it's at least two centuries after SMJ happens.My bad I kinda saw it in wikipedia after my post I'm sorry.
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Fan Creations / Re: Rebirth of the Rockman-Themed Stolen *Bleep* Thread!!
« on: April 06, 2009, 01:06:25 AM »actually, the other character looks vaguely familiar.Wait Bloodberry has pink hair but if she is from Saber Marionette R she may be Marine or not I could be wrong.
looks like this chick.
Bloodberry from Saber Marionette R.
might or might not be though. dunno.
EDIT: I think it is.
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Forum Games / Re: "What Are You Thinking Now?"
« on: April 06, 2009, 12:56:43 AM »Hm. Since it's an original Keyblade, and apparantly the character's first Key blade. Then I really see no problem with that. Now, if he were starting with an overly powerful weapon right from the start I'd have to protest.
As for the name Wiz... Unless he's setting his character up for the obvious jokes, then I think the name needs to be changed. If he or no one else can think of a better one, then the name should stay.
I still don't like the idea of giving someone a key blade, by the way it's not a Kingdom Key just to clarify, because chances are they will make it overly powerful. And again he's kinda a mage from what I remember so mages most likely should not have a weapon like that which is why I'm going to suggest a mace to him or something because I know he won't settle for a wand. Heck I don't know if he'll settle for changing his weapon because he can be a little stuborn about the most unreasonable things sometimes. As for the name I don't know what to do with it.
But if he doesn't agree to anything I'll ask him to make a contest of it and give him credit for making the story but to see who has the better format and ideas.
By the way here's the first chapter if you're intrested and also what else needs to be added if anything besides extremely good editing.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4952277/1/Kingdom_Hearts_Unrated
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Forum Games / Re: "What Are You Thinking Now?"
« on: April 05, 2009, 10:53:54 PM »Is it at least an original Keyblade or did he just take the Kingdom Keyblade?I think it's original but still it's kinda generic to have one especially since his character comes from Halloween Town, is a wizard type (I mean his character is named Wiz for crying out loud.), and the Keyblade it self is probably not so special (Even so I'd say it's a bad idea for a fan character to have a Key Blade unless it's a evil Sora that's the only time I would except it.)
But the eye color thing and not giving credit to other fan made characters is really important.
The thing is that he said he won't give out eye colors until the second part and romantic parings are added, but a majority of the fan characters (3 out of 4 or 5 that I remember) have unusual eye colors (mines pink, ones grey, and his has one eye that's blue and the other is red.) I mean it's important to make sure the reader doesn't have a WTF moment unless it was intended.
The giving credit thing is because he doesn't really know how to write very good fan fictions he did say the disclaimer saying he didn't own the game but still it would some people's pride if one guy said he made all the fan characters when he only made one.
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Forum Games / Re: Praise the above poster!
« on: April 05, 2009, 10:31:41 PM »
He writes good stories and reviews.
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Forum Games / Re: "What Are You Thinking Now?"
« on: April 05, 2009, 10:30:47 PM »
Yep I definetly I have to edit my friends fan fiction, make him add eye colors, add Agrabah, make him give his character a different wepon (it's a Kingdom Hearts fan fiction and his character has a Key Blade come on!), and make sure he credits the other people who made fan character's (my character was in the first chapter and he gave him self credit for her!).
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Forum Games / Re: "What Are You Thinking Now?"
« on: April 05, 2009, 09:36:29 AM »So I just bought a DSi...How is it?
I'm a consumer whore!
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Rockman Series / Re: These shoes rock, man.
« on: April 05, 2009, 08:57:41 AM »
I couldn't even wear those shoes if I wanted to my feet are kinda on the wide side.
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Forum Games / Re: The "What if" Game!
« on: April 05, 2009, 06:29:50 AM »
Your arteries would explode?
What if the dancing bald guy in the Six Flags commercials suddenly died?
What if the dancing bald guy in the Six Flags commercials suddenly died?
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Forum Games / Re: "What Are You Thinking Now?"
« on: April 05, 2009, 06:13:28 AM »
I knew my mom should of never bought those biodegradeable planting pots.
"I wonder what dog bones are actually made of."
"I wonder what dog bones are actually made of."
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Forum Games / Re: Praise the above poster!
« on: April 05, 2009, 03:55:27 AM »
Makes a god Death Note pun.
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Rockman Series / Re: These shoes rock, man.
« on: April 05, 2009, 03:22:14 AM »
I tend to buy New Balances, Skechers, and that one brand with the weird looking C.
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Off The Wall / Re: Lol, bot.
« on: April 05, 2009, 03:06:32 AM »
I really wish the spell check on my computer worked so that happens less often.
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Off The Wall / Re: Lol, bot.
« on: April 05, 2009, 03:02:36 AM »
Oh yeah she did get it, oh well I should of known.
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Off The Wall / Re: Lol, bot.
« on: April 05, 2009, 02:57:50 AM »
Yeah seems to only be targeting males unless someone says other wise.
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Off The Wall / Re: Lol, bot.
« on: April 05, 2009, 02:36:56 AM »
How many people actually got this spam thingy anyway?
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Fan Creations / Re: borockman's fun fun art thread!
« on: April 05, 2009, 02:36:13 AM »
*inb4 chibi nana fans*
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Off The Wall / Re: Lol, bot.
« on: April 05, 2009, 02:18:09 AM »Strange. I didn't get the message. Maybe it was only sent to specific member groups...Well from what I've heard it only seems to be specific males. But I could be wrong.
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Off The Wall / Re: Lol, bot.
« on: April 05, 2009, 02:16:12 AM »
Man that person is either really desperate, really stupid or is looking to infect your computers with a virus. Luckily I didn't get one.