3724
« on: November 28, 2009, 11:40:23 PM »
Are you serious? I mean, I know my writing is not gold(it's pretty crap actually, especially in english), but seriously man. This is... something new.
Okay, I will try to be contructive.
First thing, be so kind as to proofread. As in, try to read your story three, foour or AT LEAST two times. You know, to spot mistakes and shizz? I admit, I'm [tornado fang]ing guilty of missing quite few grammatical and spelling errors in my stories, even if I read it FIVE times. Since I suck.
Second thing, be so kind as to use paragraphs... or at least separate the text using >>ENTER<<, like I do. You know, so it won't be such a hard to read clusterfuck.
Third thing, If this is just a prologue, then I'm sorry if I'm making a mistake, but you should try to make them at least a bit longer. The stories, I mean.
Oh, and one more thing.
If you can't proofread too well, then ask someone else to proofread for you.
PEACE OUT!
..................
[tornado fang]! LUCKY STAR! DAMN YOU! WHY IN THE HELL I WAS WRITING THIS POST FOR?!