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Reply #25 on: July 09, 2009, 11:25:21 AM
Love is very beautiful, except the last line.



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Reply #26 on: July 09, 2009, 03:06:39 PM
Love is very beautiful, except the last line.
Take nothing seriously.

Alrighty, those of you who read "The Cutting Genius" and remember Black Murphy from something I posted here a while ago should know that both of the characters (Dr. Scarface and Black Murphy) were supposed to be in a story I was writing. It's kind of floating in limbo, but I decided to write this poem to briefly sum up the other characters in the story. There's no beat and the rhyming isn't great, but I hope you enjoy it anyway.

The Killers

[spoiler]Black Murphy was a rebel,
He was arrested by the Brits.
His heart turned to stone,
His flesh turned to bone,
And his rage never quits.

Motorhead, oh Motorhead,
He used to be happy all the time.
Except for his drunken father,
Who beat him for rum and lager,
Which made him into the king of crime.

Sawmill Pierrot
Was a jolly, jolly sort.
Behind the doors
On his factory floors,
He'd kill people for sport.

Iron Maiden was a lovely girl,
The fairest in all the land.
But her suitors, once her friends,
All met with their gruesome ends,
At her bloody, sword-wielding hand.

Scarface was a doctor,
He worked and worked all day.
But so goes the fable, there was
The slip on the operating table,
And now his patients are his prey.

Von Blaze was in the army,
Serving his Russian brothers well.
But his latent obsession with fire
Made the barracks a funeral pyre,
He laughed as they burned in Hell.

Schadenfreude was a man of science,
But torture and suffering was his game.
The evils which he commited,
The armour in which he's fitted,
Are all products of his fear-inspiring name.[/spoiler]

Oh, I'll also take requests, if anyone has any. Drawings might take a while, but if you want to request a poem (about just about anything, even your own characters), I'll gladly see what I can work up.



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Reply #27 on: July 09, 2009, 03:19:04 PM
Interesting poem, giving us a general jist of each of them.

As for requests... Needs more DWII. 8D


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Reply #28 on: July 09, 2009, 03:20:03 PM
Take nothing seriously.
Nah, I just lazy to put smiley there.
But I like your poetry. Or else, why would I posted a comment in your thread after all?



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Reply #29 on: July 09, 2009, 03:35:23 PM
As for requests... Needs more DWII. 8D

Dr. Wily

[spoiler]Dr. Wily, Dr. Wily,
Sitting in your lab all day.
I think you're missing a screw
Trying to kill the boy in blue,
Why don't you just go out and play?

Sure, your Robot Masters are
Loyal (and rather shiny, too!),
But they invariably fail
And you're thrown into jail,
Don't you have something better to do?

With your sinister wiggly eyebrows
And your flapping wing-like hair,
You've got the looks to be bad,
And your cackling's pretty mad,
The way you keep losing, it just isn't fair.

Face it, Dr. Wily, you're old hat,
It's just not worth it anymore.
If you're not in the next sequel,
You'll have to make do with a prequel,
I guess Capcom thinks you're a bore.

Pack your bags, Dr. Wily,
Get out and make way for the new.
With his wit and his flair,
His cunning debonaire,
The new villain in town, it's Dr. Wily II.[/spoiler]

Yes, I pronounce it "Dr. Wily Two" instead of "Dr. Wily the Second". What of it?



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Reply #30 on: July 09, 2009, 03:44:50 PM
Yes, I pronounce it "Dr. Wily Two" instead of "Dr. Wily the Second". What of it?
Nothing, I use 2 myself. 8D
And that was great. :3


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Reply #31 on: July 09, 2009, 03:45:43 PM
And that was great. :3
I threw it together in about five minutes...



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Reply #32 on: July 09, 2009, 03:46:41 PM
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A real talent *two thumbs up*



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Reply #33 on: July 09, 2009, 03:54:13 PM
I threw it together in about five minutes...
Then you have a knack for poetry!


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Reply #34 on: July 09, 2009, 04:10:14 PM
I am impressed. Again.



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Reply #35 on: July 09, 2009, 04:15:54 PM
Dr. Wily

[spoiler]Dr. Wily, Dr. Wily,
Sitting in your lab all day.
I think you're missing a screw
Trying to kill the boy in blue,
Why don't you just go out and play?

Sure, your Robot Masters are
Loyal (and rather shiny, too!),
But they invariably fail
And you're thrown into jail,
Don't you have something better to do?

With your sinister wiggly eyebrows
And your flapping wing-like hair,
You've got the looks to be bad,
And your cackling's pretty mad,
The way you keep losing, it just isn't fair.

Face it, Dr. Wily, you're old hat,
It's just not worth it anymore.
If you're not in the next sequel,
You'll have to make do with a prequel,
I guess Capcom thinks you're a bore.

Pack your bags, Dr. Wily,
Get out and make way for the new.
With his wit and his flair,
His cunning debonaire,
The new villain in town, it's Dr. Wily II.[/spoiler]
Very nice, I'm amazed it only took you five minutes. It almost seems like the lyrics to a song though, so I gotta wonder, would it work if it was sung to MM2 Wily Stage 1?  8D



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Reply #36 on: July 09, 2009, 04:18:03 PM
I'm not big on poetry but that Dr Wily poem sure is cool!

and love caught me off guard.


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Reply #37 on: July 09, 2009, 04:23:02 PM
would it work if it was sung to MM2 Wily Stage 1?  8D
A shilling to the man and/or woman who can record this for my amusement!

I jest. But thanks to everyone who's commented. Your kind words keep me writing.



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Reply #38 on: July 09, 2009, 04:26:36 PM
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You write good stuffs, I'm sure that will draw a lot of ppl into your thread soon.
And keep writing, you're good at it. Show us more of your talent.



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Reply #39 on: July 09, 2009, 04:33:17 PM
A shilling to the man and/or woman who can record this for my amusement!
Time for me to get a mic!


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Reply #40 on: July 09, 2009, 04:35:51 PM
Now this I have to hear!  XD


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Reply #41 on: July 09, 2009, 04:37:43 PM
There once was a man named Nick,
he most certainly was not a dick.
His stuff was a killer hit,
it was the [parasitic bomb].

I know this poem sucks,
but bear with me,
because this maybe the key,
to the secret of the ducks.

This nothing but a tribute,
something I wished to contribute.
Perhaps I should stop here,
before you all run in fear.

This the end,
I hope your brain is on the mend.
Farewell to you,
make sure the cows go 'Moo!'




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Reply #42 on: July 09, 2009, 04:38:38 PM
That's the best reply I've seen today.  >0<


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Reply #43 on: July 09, 2009, 04:38:57 PM
Bravo! Bravo! Encore! *Applauds and throws a rose*

 O^O -Sniff- A masterpiece for the ages!



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Reply #44 on: July 09, 2009, 04:40:34 PM
There once was a man named Nick,
he most certainly was not a dick.
His stuff was killer hit,
it was the [parasitic bomb].

I know this poem sucks,
but bear with me,
because this maybe the key,
to the secret of the ducks.

This nothing but a tribute,
something I wished to contribute.
Perhaps I should stop here,
before you all run in fear.

This the end,
I hope your brain is on the mend.
Farewell to you,
make sure the cows go 'Moo!'
Well, this just made my day 8) but I want to know, what's the secret of ducks you mentioned? 8D



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Reply #45 on: July 09, 2009, 04:41:17 PM
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They don't wear pants >0<



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Reply #46 on: July 09, 2009, 04:41:49 PM
Ducks kill thing.

Especially mouse.


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Reply #47 on: July 09, 2009, 04:47:10 PM
... *standing ovation*
Bravo... Bravo...

Now this I have to hear!  XD
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Reply #48 on: July 09, 2009, 04:47:30 PM
The Secret of Ducks

[spoiler]Do you want to know the secret,
The secret of ducks?
The secret goes
That ducks are not to be trusted.
I knew a duck once.
The foulest fowl to be found.
Ducks kill things, you see.
Especially mice.
They don't wear pants.
They never wash up after eating.
Ducks are the spawn of the devil;
The almighty monster Quackmodeus!
Run, my boy! The ducks are here!
The bills, the bills!
Filled with the fangs of hatred!
Their secret is out!
The secret of the ducks!
They will eat your soul!
Never trust the ducks![/spoiler]

I've created a monster.



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Reply #49 on: July 09, 2009, 04:48:41 PM
...I love you.