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Reply #50 on: April 06, 2013, 08:10:11 AM
Rockman party thingie is something I will soon start working on.
You'll see...

Anyway, I've been kinda [tornado fang]ing around with writing a certain thing, I'm not sure what it's actually supposed to be, but eh. It's kinda fun writing this.

They are all shorts, like, very short, and they've been written on a whim... kinda.

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Text of Azranoth


Passage I - At Unity's End

[spoiler]
Bound by timeless friendship,
The four kingdoms stand.
When finally one's treachery,
Brings about the end.

Once bound by sealed pact,
The three kingdoms fall.
Kingdom of Vizethnir,
Has betrayed them now.

Thus He is crowned,
Supreme ruler of Rha'vuk.
And as He takes his throne,
The world turns to dark.

There is but one kingdom now,
One of chaos and death.
Nothing remains of unity,
Only despair is left.
[/spoiler]


Passage II - The Great Darkening

[spoiler]As his power grows,
ReDeus desires more.
And so he reached out,
To the Heavens above.

So began a war,
War against the Gods.
The Holy Seven won,
As such ReDeus lost.

He did not give up,
Due to his foolish pride.
And using the rest of his power,
He brought an end to Tree of Life.

And so the tree burned down,
In ReDeus' hate.
Nothing remained of it
Such was its fate.[/spoiler]


Passage III - New Age of Progress

[spoiler]Long since humans have forgotten,
The Unity of the Four.
Now they are all divided,
Chaos beckons them all.

Using ancient wisdom, they invented means,
To better their own life, ignoring the will of Gods..
Now they seek, what untouched should remain,
City of Koroem-Nu, from the ancient times.

One of them found it, disturbing their rest,
Vrakkonians, children of knowledge awake.
Thus tragedy begins anew, as the Heavens roar
The horns of Vrakkonians shine proudly.

Such it began, a mass annihilation,
Humans stood no chance.
Against the might of the Golden Horns,
Even the Gods tremble.[/spoiler]


Passage IV - Heroes Who Brought Hope

[spoiler]As the war against the Golden Horns have reached its zenith,
Humans begin to fall into despair, as their defeat draws close.
Areabia the Vrakkonian Queen, gives an ultimatum.
"Give up and live, or die by foolishness of defiance."

And so the humans gave up, to the Vrakkonian rule.
The Golden Horns have recovered their world,
Enslaved and tortured, humans have become.
Entrapped as a result of their ambitions.

Yet there were still, those who sought out hope,
Nelis Pendragon, The Sorceress who knew no defeat.
Santzudan, The Messenger of Gods.
Natheniel, The Mage of Miracles.

Those three have fought, their hope undying,
Using wisdom long thought forgotten.
They cast The Golden Horns into the Emerald Abyss,
Then they disappeared, never to be seen again.

But their "hope" was never forgotten.[/spoiler]



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Reply #51 on: April 06, 2013, 08:25:24 AM
THINGIE

THINGIES

Nice Texts there.


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Reply #52 on: April 06, 2013, 08:31:48 AM
Agreed with Wily. I like the texts a lot.



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Reply #53 on: April 06, 2013, 02:58:58 PM
Thanks guys.

I've actually written a couple more, since well, it's not like they are intensly hard to write.


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Text of Deception


Passage I - Deception of the Witch


[spoiler]Clad in red dress, from beyond the mist of time,
She appeared, with a message most disturbing.

"There is no hope in the path you seek."

Shaken to the core, the Mage of Miracles,
Begins to wonder if his path is truly right.
Unaware that at the core of everything,
He shall fall into a trap.

She promised to grant Him his heart's desire,
But there was a condition that was not spoken.
For in exchange for the wish,
She would take Her away.

And so in eternal slumber She fell,
A person most dear to him.
He himself became undying,
Yet it's not how this ends.

Turn they now again, the gears of Time Fortress,
Where the Witch of Time shall oversee.
What will become of the Fallen Hero,
And the Heroine of Tragedy.[/spoiler]


Passage II - Undying Wish

[spoiler]A shadow falls over the world,
From the darkness come the undying ones.
Lead by a God of Darkness,
Humans must fight back.

Dark God whose power is unmatched,
Whose wisdom is limitless.
He possesses a secret which he guards,
A secret of his true motives.

Nosferatu are they called,
Those who have refused death.
Long since oppressed by humankind,
They now wish to rule.

Heroes fight and die,
But the dark army marches on.
Thus the Dark God,
Gets closer to his goal.

Turn they still, the gears of Time Fortress,
Where the Witch of Time oversees.
What will become of the Fallen Hero,
And the Heroine of Tragedy.[/spoiler]


Passage III - True Desire

[spoiler]He failed once again,
The Dark God weeps.
For his death didn't come.
Once more it will begin.

Having betrayed everyone,
Just to get this far.
He has nothing else left,
But to finally die.

But the death did not come,
Nor it ever will.
For he is the undying one,
The Heroine shall still sleep.

The Witch of Time laughs,
For in madness He drowns.
Her plans of deceit,
Finally paid off.

They keep turning, the gears of Time Fortress,
Where the Witch of Time has obtained victory.
Through the Staff of the Timemaster,
She opens the gate.

To release upon history...

All of Her hate.[/spoiler]
« Last Edit: April 06, 2013, 11:01:07 PM by Archetype »



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Reply #54 on: April 06, 2013, 06:37:19 PM
Oh boy... So classic.


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Reply #55 on: April 06, 2013, 10:01:07 PM
Oh boy... So classic.
Hm? What do you mean?



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Reply #56 on: April 06, 2013, 11:03:58 PM
Very, very nice work. Can't wait to see more.

You had a typo in the third line of Passage II (Lead by a a God of Darkness). I fixed it for you.



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Reply #57 on: April 06, 2013, 11:28:22 PM
Very, very nice work. Can't wait to see more.

You had a typo in the third line of Passage II (Lead by a a God of Darkness). I fixed it for you.

Thanks and thanks. My mind was pretty much drifting off, So my proofreading had some holes.
And this [parasitic bomb] is so short too.




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Reply #58 on: April 07, 2013, 05:50:31 AM
Hm? What do you mean?
Hero promised wish, wish gets twisted, hero loses love, hero purged into darkness, hero tries, hero goes mad, hero becomes ultimate evil.
I love it.


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Reply #59 on: April 20, 2013, 05:55:53 PM


Here's an alternate version of my current avatar.
I call her, "The Royal Slur".
Because the outfit is kinda like something a noble would wear.

Plus glasses.



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Reply #60 on: April 20, 2013, 11:31:44 PM
her? I thought slur was a dude.



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Reply #61 on: April 20, 2013, 11:42:35 PM
her? I thought slur was a dude.
Technically she's genderless like Serenade.

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Reply #62 on: April 21, 2013, 03:57:34 AM
her? I thought slur was a dude.

No.

Technically she's genderless like Serenade.

Since when? Just because Serenade was not in the anime, and that she got similar role (what with the friggin' fights against Forte) doesn't mean she's genderless.

I mean, she's voiced by Viletta Nu's voice actress too.

And no, I don't care that apparently the english release of BN artbook calls her a "boy" or some [parasitic bomb]. Udon is just bananas.



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Reply #63 on: April 21, 2013, 05:13:25 AM
She does look regal...
You should use that instead.


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Reply #64 on: April 24, 2013, 08:04:26 PM


A little something with Alkaid from .HACK G.U.



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Reply #65 on: April 24, 2013, 08:26:46 PM
I like the innocent look! XD



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Reply #66 on: April 25, 2013, 02:44:32 PM
I THINK SHE NEEDS A HUG *hugs*


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Reply #67 on: April 25, 2013, 05:11:56 PM
I like how the top of her hair looks like ribbons.



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Reply #68 on: April 26, 2013, 03:45:07 PM
Thanks guys. [/boring response]



I honestly don't feel like applying colors to this now, so here.

It's an Avatar called Macha from .HACK G.U.



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Reply #69 on: April 26, 2013, 03:54:04 PM
Those fingers... Must be real good for stabbing and ripping hearts out... D:


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Reply #70 on: May 12, 2013, 04:46:10 PM


I just did this now, it's done quickly and dirty because I can't care enough.

[spoiler] It's the friend of all children, Unity. From the Wilypocalypse RP YAAY[/spoiler]



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Reply #71 on: May 12, 2013, 04:51:41 PM
Looks good.

Very friendly looking.



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Reply #72 on: May 12, 2013, 04:54:01 PM
It's... *dramatic gasp* HIM


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Reply #73 on: May 17, 2013, 09:10:19 PM
In preparation for something, have this:

[spoiler]When the Skies darken,
And the Wind blows strong,
We have to remember,
The shining Light above.

In the Temple of Creation,
The Rainbow Girl resides,
There she is guarded,
By Seven different Lights.

Black Shadow cannot match,
The will of the strong.
Through shared belief is triumph,
All hail the Rainbow Goddess.

Death claims anybody,
Who loses sight of themselves.
As long as you believe,
She will hear your prayer.

In the Temple of Creation,
The Rainbow Girl resides.
From her Shadow is born,
A horrifying malice.[/spoiler]



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Reply #74 on: May 18, 2013, 03:40:05 AM
The Shadow of a Goddess... Well shi-


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