MegaMan Zero: The ghosts of the past

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on: January 18, 2009, 05:48:31 PM
I though it was a good idea to continue the story of MegaMan Zero (which would still continue if there wouldn't be those two DS games... IMO). So here is it, my comic which takes place 7 months after Zero 4:
1st page: Here
Actual Page: Here


*Note 1: The comic looks a bit crappy from begin, but it gets better
 Note 2: Yes, I know that the DD title says ghousts....it was too late to change that
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Reply #1 on: January 18, 2009, 09:47:29 PM
hmm... its interesting...

...When Larry the reploid accountant goes maverick of his own accord, he's certainly formidable during tax season, but he isn't going to provide X the challenge needed to make him grow as a warrior and reach his potential.


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Reply #2 on: January 18, 2009, 10:50:14 PM
Spriting is pretty good, but the script needs work. Maybe English isn't your primary language, but still.
Ellipses (...) are bad, by the way - we all go through a phase where we use them constantly, unfortunately.



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Reply #3 on: January 19, 2009, 01:49:51 AM
Could be worse, but doesn't make much sense with the actual post-Z4 events even if Zero would be alive, and Phantom doesn't feel like Phantom at all.

Also, check your spelling.



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Reply #4 on: January 19, 2009, 02:15:57 PM
1. Yeah, I´m still learning english
2. I planned to make Phantom differnet for secret reasons


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Reply #5 on: February 07, 2009, 08:36:15 PM
OK guys page 38 is up.


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Reply #6 on: February 07, 2009, 09:26:49 PM
If you need help ask me. I can help you with the script, if you want. Hopefully your version of Lito won´t suck ass like in the awful Zero Manga. However the sprite of him looks really nice.



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Reply #7 on: February 21, 2009, 08:48:52 PM
I don´t plan on making him Zero´s little sidekick...Altough I can let him create a Zero copy [eyebrow]

Posted on: February 08, 2009, 12:05:35
Page 39 is up, go check it out and give some C+C, please O^O


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Reply #8 on: February 21, 2009, 09:49:49 PM
Close-ups on sprites really don't work...
No idea what kind of feeling is supposed to be conveyed by Zeros reaction to "mauve".



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Reply #9 on: April 25, 2009, 01:38:22 PM
Update after a while....page 40


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Reply #10 on: April 25, 2009, 02:01:04 PM
I just realized that the title field of the page says "ghousts".



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Reply #11 on: April 25, 2009, 02:06:05 PM
You are like the 10th to notice that  ::)  Yes, it was a Typpo I didn´t know how to fix


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Reply #13 on: April 25, 2009, 02:08:06 PM
You are like the 10th to notice that  ::) Yes, it was a Typpo I didn´t know how to fix
Well, how did you make/get the page? It shouldn't be hard.



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Reply #14 on: April 25, 2009, 02:11:27 PM
lol
Don´t. Say. A word.
Well, how did you make/get the page? It shouldn't be hard.
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Reply #15 on: April 25, 2009, 02:38:01 PM
Um... Let's try another way. What do you do to add a new page?



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Reply #16 on: April 25, 2009, 05:08:24 PM
There is an "Add page" button whre you can upload the newest page, write the name of the page and add a commentary to the page


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Reply #17 on: April 25, 2009, 07:47:00 PM
Oh.


...www.webcomic for dummies.com?



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Reply #18 on: April 25, 2009, 07:58:44 PM
Drunkduck.com, but if you have some coding skills you can make whatever you want with your comic


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Reply #19 on: May 07, 2009, 08:29:04 PM
Page 41 is up, go see it.  8)


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Reply #20 on: May 23, 2009, 06:15:54 PM
New Chapter starts with page 42....A big fight is comming near
Click


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Reply #21 on: July 11, 2009, 02:38:33 PM
Page 43 is up...finnaly, enjoy:
Page 43


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Reply #22 on: July 11, 2009, 02:43:11 PM
RECOLOR FIGHT!!!

Nice work. Some of your grammar and spelling is still off, but I can tell you're trying.



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Reply #23 on: October 13, 2009, 08:48:55 PM
Page 44 : Two falcons
How is this going to end?

Answer:

RECOLOR FIGHT!!!


Posted on: August 07, 2009, 10:46:44
Something big will happen:
45 - Comming storm


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Reply #24 on: October 13, 2009, 11:40:27 PM
Good job buddy! Keep it up  ;)