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Sapphire Knight · **Reply #7975 on:** September 06, 2013, 08:07:32 AM

Lessee... So far, I've got 7 chibis posed, 2 sketched, and at least 4 more planned.

Sketched: Sapph (redesigned again with an extra) and Sakura
Posed: PB, PBPB, Quickie, Vixy, Dr Wily II
Planned: Akai, Viper's OC, Mirby, and Superdee/Archetype

Any others I should add?

Posted on: September 05, 2013, 11:04:08 PM

And now I need to log out due to lightning.

ViperAcidZX · **Reply #7976 on:** September 06, 2013, 08:08:32 AM

Wait, one detail I may have missed: my OC has payots/side-locks on the sides, kinda like what Spiritia Rosenberg or Freudia Neuwahl from RosenkreuzStilette have with their hair.

Phi · **Reply #7977 on:** September 06, 2013, 08:15:49 AM

Quote from: Sapphire Knight on September 06, 2013, 08:07:32 AM

Any others I should add?

Phi

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Quickman · **Reply #7978 on:** September 06, 2013, 09:58:05 AM

Starting on the translation adaptation. Right in the beginning, Giovanni repeats himself with this wonky sentence structure that would result in acting so wooden that it'd give you splinters. Cut the repeated bits, and reworded the entire redundant section for clarity and better flow.

Rin · **Reply #7979 on:** September 06, 2013, 11:39:49 AM

It seems like earlier I missed a page or two of some serious conversation.
Good.

Quickman · **Reply #7980 on:** September 06, 2013, 11:48:59 AM

I think I missed it, too. Good.

And good god, this translation is so clunky... Redundant wording, circular dialogue, the lines going off in other directions with no transition whatsoever... I have my work cut out for me...

Mr. Haxwell · **Reply #7981 on:** September 06, 2013, 12:02:44 PM

Quote from: Sapphire Knight on September 06, 2013, 08:07:32 AM

Any others I should add?

There's Kathy, and her SNM9 form. Here's Morte and a sketch of Hazard in the making.

I plan on making my colors the inversion of Vixy's, BTW.

Quickman · **Reply #7982 on:** September 06, 2013, 12:22:24 PM

Finished adapting the first episode of The Birth of Mewtwo. The script will go through a few more revisions when I type it up. Need to decide on music and foley, first. Also, decide on who will play who, see if Ringman's wife wants in on the action.

No, I'm not auditioning anyone else. If his wife won't join in, fine. Just Ringman and I, then.

Mr. Haxwell · **Reply #7983 on:** September 06, 2013, 02:59:09 PM

My hands seems to have gone numb. Can't even feel the mouse properly when I'm clicking it.

VixyNyan · **Reply #7984 on:** September 06, 2013, 03:13:45 PM

Morte is my soft fluffy favorite, along with Kathy's SNM9 form~

Lesbian threesome? x3

Quickman · **Reply #7985 on:** September 06, 2013, 03:46:32 PM

Episode two adapted. Finally worked through a difficult part with this goofy pun song that loses half of the meaning in the translation. I'll need to either tweak it, re-adapt it, or cut it entirely and replace it with dialogue that describes similar stuff. This one will require some more revision when I type it up.

Dr. Wily II · **Reply #7986 on:** September 06, 2013, 03:58:21 PM

Argh... I thought I could come out by now... Looks like I really can be fully out tomorrow. In the night. Ffffffff...

Quickman · **Reply #7987 on:** September 06, 2013, 04:05:44 PM

Haze?

I've been up since midnight. I'm considering a loooooong nap later. I've adapted two episodes so far, so I think I deserve a rest. I might do a better adaptation after some sleep.

Managed to sneak in some fanservice, though.

Dr. Wily II · **Reply #7988 on:** September 06, 2013, 04:31:02 PM

Nah, it's not that.
... Things got delayed, tis' all...

Also, fanservice?

Quickman · **Reply #7989 on:** September 06, 2013, 04:32:57 PM

Just a couple little nods to the anime. Team Rocket's Japanese motto was incorporated into a few lines, so I altered those to reflect the English version. Oh yes, someone is blasting off again.

Also, a Meowth clone got a cameo. I had to add "that's right!" to its lines.

Dr. Wily II · **Reply #7990 on:** September 06, 2013, 04:39:00 PM

Sweet, sounds very promising.

Quickman · **Reply #7991 on:** September 06, 2013, 04:43:04 PM

Some of Amber's dialogue is a bit clunky, so it was tweaked. There were a couple lines that made no sense, so they were changed. They most likely made sense in Japanese, but, again, stuff was lost in translation. I had the most trouble with a pun song based on the Japanese Pokemon names. I kept it pretty much the same, aside from localizing the names, but it's so clunky that it may end up being revised later, or, if I have to, cut entirely and replaced with dialogue the conveys a similar meaning. Just transitioning into the song was a pain.

Sapphire Knight · **Reply #7992 on:** September 06, 2013, 08:31:13 PM

Quote from: Phi on September 06, 2013, 08:15:49 AM

Phi

[spoiler][/spoiler]

Uh... Is Phi a character, persona, or waifu? o3o (Sorry if I'm dense ATM, got up late after listening to thunder all night and I feel like someone's been standing on my face fore two days.)

Phi · **Reply #7993 on:** September 06, 2013, 08:39:52 PM

Phi is a character from Wilypocalypse.

Sapphire Knight · **Reply #7994 on:** September 06, 2013, 08:54:39 PM

Alrighty then. Just need a bit more coffee and to catch up on things, then I can continue chibis.

Rin · **Reply #7995 on:** September 06, 2013, 09:30:01 PM

So yeah. Classic YGO, GX, 5D's and Zexal are getting dvd releases from Cinedgm in USA.
Plus 5D's and Zexal are getting Blu-Rays.

It will most probably be only the dubbed versions, but I don't give a [parasitic bomb].
I'm still going to try and get me some Zexal or 5D's or even the classic YGO ([tornado fang] GX).

Sakura Leic · **Reply #7996 on:** September 06, 2013, 09:59:09 PM

Thought I was getting sick but it turned out to be the heat, I don't care what that guy said they need to fix the damn AC in the room I'm working in, the boss' office is way cooler.

Police Girl · **Reply #7997 on:** September 06, 2013, 11:28:37 PM

Quote from: Sakura Leic on September 06, 2013, 09:59:09 PM

Thought I was getting sick but it turned out to be the heat, I don't care what that guy said they need to fix the damn AC in the room I'm working in, the boss' office is way cooler.

You carbon copier, you.

I got some free skittles today! They fell out of the vending machine when somebody bought something.

Sakura Leic · **Reply #7998 on:** September 07, 2013, 01:47:43 AM

Work is finally done, I'm pooped.

Sapphire Knight · **Reply #7999 on:** September 07, 2013, 01:52:38 AM

Gah! I can't draw under these conditions! Dad keeps watching over my shoulder and attempting to tell me what to draw.

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